Denjin N - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

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I understand he wants the police to leave his previous idol alone.
But didn't he think that he's now giving them more of a reason to focus on her?
 
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There wouldn't be an interesting story without exposing himself to the police I guess.

Still, good artwork. Enough for a read.
 
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Plot: 5
Art: 9
Execution: 9

Comments: I see that this MC will also fall under the same error of Kira, fucking exposing himself at the very start of the story.
 
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@Skillgg
Typos on page 6:
bouldeing >> bouldering
preffer >> prefer
Typos on page 9:
biuro >> ??? (building?)
gilotine >> guillotine
painfull >> painful
Typo on page 11: elevator malfunctioned >> the elevator malfunctioned
 
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@nutjob thank you! I didnt catch those. Gonna fix em as fast as i can
Done... Again, Thank you very much...
 
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Eh... He could've easily killed them and that would've been it, feels like forced plot. Enjoying it though.
 
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I quite like that he's revealing himself trough stoopid, cause if he actually was smart he would quite literally be unstoppable, and that would be boring.
 
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There's a reason people like this are called "SIMP", as in SIMPleminded fool. He could've became another Kira but no, not with that attitude.
 

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