Dimensional Mercenary - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

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Seems pretty promising so far but we'll have to see I guess. My personal complaint is the art looks a little bit off but I think that's just because it's Korean.
 
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Your soul dude, pretty clear they want you to work like a slave for them. Remember dude, you only got 1% of the reward... so where did the rest go?
 
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Mind reading women...
Oof already for mc plus if his identity was stolen then why does he have to pay those debts?🤔
This has got a follow from me now 👍
 
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his life has been wrecked so hard no wonder his father is that broken. dude in that situation didn't have a luxury to choose easy high demand jobs and should take any job that was available rather than being unemployed and becoming an extra parasite to the house
 
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"Level 1"
Interesting setting with how the "game" is him entering different dimensions to assume people's roles, but expectations on this just dropped to the same level as other generic power-leveling-manwhas. Still looking forward for more of the world building though. Penalties for dying during a "quest", etc.
 
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Till this point i like it. If they make something like a less explicit "gantz" then im pretty much already in it :D
Now that i write that down, if i compare the two, even the arts are somehow similars.
Thanks for the translation.
 
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@kbalintz What do you mean by explicit? We just talking gore or are you hoping is more pg in general like solo leveling or the gamer? Just curious.
 
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Its a deal with the devil alright, but a beneficial one for him and his mother... As long as he survives.
 
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im reading her voice like shes a man in an action movie because of that phone call and the font. also thanks for releasing these chaps, sucks that theres a paywall.
 
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@Dezaki All those living there are parasites to the house, he isn't any more than the rest. Any of them could take jobs to help out.
 
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why even add the soul part into the story? you could just have had it be him being motivated by wanting to pay for his mothers medical expenses and them taking advantage of it. maybe he goes to the other world and then "sells" all the gold to them for a lower price because they need it for interdenominational businesses or some shit.
 
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Hope it will be a 1 Life Story anderen that his Level is More like how mutch the compay trusts him
 
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@Merilirem In this context i meant more pg as a lighter experience. Do not misunderstand me, i loved reading gantz and still love it, but i know some people who started and dropped it just because some of the contents were too much for them.
And in this serie i maybe can see some potential, to do something similar if the author/writer is talented/brave enough. This "short term, take over someone else body" soul transportation "isekai" system can hold a lot of deeper meaning in it than the usual "i leave my world and do some stuff in an other".
Like if mc dies in the battlefield, is he gonna come back and just get a penality or die? And if he comes back, the person, who's body got taken over die there? If this is the case and mc somehow gonna know it how he's gonna react?
There can be a lot of interesting stuff if the author has any intention to show what happens with others and not just with mc.And that could give an edge to the story. With more thoughts, drama and bigger (more human-like) stakes.
Maybe its too early to plant any big hopes for this serie, but from what (some of us can think) happened with his sister, and how mc seems somewhat intelligent from how he handled the noble, i see some ray of hopes to some true characterdrama and developement. Not with people getting torn apart in 2 pages but in a more consumable form.

I hope its somewhat understandble. Its not too long ago since i started learning english properly and i know my writing is pretty bad, sorry for that.
 
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The soul part was already in the story from the beginning. Remember the questions they asked when he signed up online?
 
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Nothing like mind-delving succubi to get the ball rolling. Hopefully he kills that friend down the line.
 

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