Doomsia's Healing Sessions - Ch. 6 - Seasoned Aquanas (Re-release)

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I seem to have missed something, what is everyone talking about "missing chapter" or "changed content" ?
First version was the MC segz q cat girl for discount as a one time thing probably but a lot of people did not like it since they prefer a MC - Main girl romance rather than some open relationship.

The other half just say the author is a little rat for apologizing and that was a mistake.

Overall brainrot (i do prefer the romance rather than pseudo harem- person taste)
 
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Don't change the story too much to meet popular demands. I didn't like the sex, but I respected your choices on it. I have other stories where the mc's girlfriend is killed soon after them finally getting together after a decade of will they won't they. I still plan to read the next book.

You need to embrace our pain and suffering we give from reading your work.
 
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“Damned if you do, damned if you don’t.”

As someone pointed out in the comments on another site, the previous version’s plot looked like a hentai plot: “Good samaritan cleric goes around using his dick to help women who have a curse that makes them horny.

So I think this version is better since it doesn’t read like a hentai plot. Let this be a lesson, @senukin.

Thanks for the chapter!
 
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Don't change the story too much to meet popular demands. I didn't like the sex, but I respected your choices on it. I have other stories where the mc's girlfriend is killed soon after them finally getting together after a decade of will they won't they. I still plan to read the next book.

You need to embrace our pain and suffering we give from reading your work.
Nah what is that story drop the sauce
 
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Bring back the Cleric fucking the shopkeeper

WE GOT TOURISTS

Anyone who don't like the Cleric having segg with cat girl shopkeeper for a discount is a straight-up TOURISTS. Why bullied the author and their team changing the narrative of this chapter??

Now the author has to listened to these tourists without having any creative freedom
 
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Kind of a shame, though I get it. I didn't love the previous chapter, though I was willing to tolerate it. I do understand the negative reactions from everyone, and you course-correcting as a result. Seems like a damned if you do, damned if you don't situation. Bad call in the first place really.
 
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Lol, shit like this redo never works, most of the people that hated the cuck shit (like me, I just forgot to hit drop) are already gone and the ones that are in to it now think the author is a pussy. Doing the cuck shit has alienated the first group and apologizing has done the same to the other, the end result is that no one trusts you now. Either think this shit through before you do it or don't bother. Apologizing is pointless, it never works online.
Bro's right; apologizing never, ever works. All it does is tell people that they can press you into doing whatever it is that they want, regardless of how you might feel about it. Just tell the story that you want and accept the fact that this means some people won't read it. If you try to please everybody, you please nobody, least of all yourself.
 
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Was the previous upload a wrongly uploaded fanbox exclusive or something?:questionblob:
that would make sense, it was weirdly aggressive from the get go compared to the other chapters and the NTR aspect was def not something that had any right to be included into the story for any good story progression so it might have been for a special tier of degens.
 
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Kind of a shame, though I get it. I didn't love the previous chapter, though I was willing to tolerate it. I do understand the negative reactions from everyone, and you course-correcting as a result. Seems like a damned if you do, damned if you don't situation. Bad call in the first place really.
fr, im a passionate ntr hater but i just thought of it as a weird creative choice so im glad they changed it. But ppl in this forum are extreme holy heck, they act like it happened to them.
 
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Regardless of the change, I am quite intrigued with the implication of the version before. If her curse is not of a unique effect, if other similar curses also exists, wouldn't that mean the way to cure/delay their symptom is to not fight against them as well? You gotta segg everyone with similar curse of Lust?

Granted, the first page being frontal sex, right at front of the counter, is plenty weird. No real ppl would do that, so either I take it as a funny comedy or a horrible tragedy. However, it brought up interesting conflict: is the pair actually have feelings with each other, or Cleric just doing what he thought as "the best plan" to the predicament? Maybe the Cleric is just a generic horny playboy and Doomsia put too much faith in him, or maybe she really shouldn't have put that faith up in the first place. Or maybe, it is actually the best plan, but it takes a long time to formulate and realize it; the party has no luxury of time to spare and had to always on the move and act asap.

In my idealized version of writing, a paradise of my vision, the actual sex scene can be done off-screen, but make Doomsia aware of it regardless. If I need to put out content for the Patreon, I am sure I can work off of that instead of doing the strange sex on the counter thing.
 

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