Dorei wo Choukyoushite Harem Tsukuru - Ch. 52

[MarqFJA87]

@Sullieman There's a superfluous word in page 2: "But if all you're only gonna use it for is house chores..."

 

[Outflanks10]

I hope she finds a hobby which stops her from hurting herself.

Thanks for the translation

 

[Koikoi]

Thought she was gonna goon till evening

 

[chojinra]

Let’s hope that she finds a hobby she likes and stops it with her 24/7 slave dynamic thing.

Sorry, that’s her kink. It’s not going away anytime soon.

 

[AMicrowave]

Wouldn't "a brat like you" make more sense that "you brat" in the context spoken here, that or "you, you brat"

 

[Davrwa]

Needs more sex tbh

 

[Jatopian]

Damn, ironing clothes with your own hands, now that's functional magic-usage if I've ever seen it.

just don't accidentally turn it on during fappy time

She is such a masochist that scalding her hands and genitals is all part of the fun.

Let’s hope that she finds a hobby she likes and stops it with her 24/7 slave dynamic thing.

Hopefully a hobby that helps keep her mind out of the loins.

Far more likely that she finds a hobby that synergizes with her other interests.

 

[smormu]

She is such a masochist that scalding her hands and genitals is all part of the fun.

Far more likely that she finds a hobby that synergizes with her other interests.

She might branch out into pet play or embrace the father/daughter dynamic

 

[smormu]

Needs more sex tbh

Then read the r18 version

 

[parodyres]

I hope that one day, we will actually be able to use magic. Because damn, is it super convenient for a lot of things.

 

[JethroBodine]

"I want Master to treat me like a slave". Oh dear, happiness in slavery?

 

[animan095]

Place your bets! Is it going to be an average hobby? Or is it going to be a shit crazy hobby that will make this series cancelled?

 

[DarkenedStar]

Time for a father daughter shopping date. I mean... master and slave shopping date.

Considering her disposition I can only imagine what type of hobbies she'd get into if she were left to her own devices.

RIP Daisy. Cause of death: Boredom. (Specifically, auto-erotic asphyxiation)

 

[BananowyJE]

New hobby? How about taking care of the children you will make with Master?

 

[Sullieman]

@Sullieman There's a superfluous word in page 2: "But if all you're only gonna use it for is house chores..."

Fixed.

Wouldn't "a brat like you" make more sense that "you brat" in the context spoken here, that or "you, you brat"

Taking that into consideration I changed the line on page 8 to make it a bit more accurate as well.

 

[AMicrowave]

Fixed.


Taking that into consideration I changed the line on page 8 to make it a bit more accurate as well.

page 9 also has the problem with "I can help you brat find" that one would make more sense as "I can help a brat like you find"

 

[Sultan_erin]

I hope that one day, we will actually be able to use magic. Because damn, is it super convenient for a lot of things.

Modern tech is already beyond magical, we just stopped calling them magic because they are real. for example: while not in the way ancient alchemist imagined, material science has created many stuff that is beyond the imagination of ancient people; one of the biggest miracle in islam involve travelling between mecca to jerusalem and back again overnight, modern commercial jet can do it in 4 hours, and some supersonic jet can go several times faster; and don't forget about the absolute greatest miracle of the modern time, semiconductors and its limitless derivatives: from processors to storage devices to solar panels to LEDs and many other applications wont be possible without it.

 

[parodyres]

Modern tech is already beyond magical, we just stopped calling them magic because they are real. for example: while not in the way ancient alchemist imagined, material science has created many stuff that is beyond the imagination of ancient people; one of the biggest miracle in islam involve travelling between mecca to jerusalem and back again overnight, modern commercial jet can do it in 4 hours, and some supersonic jet can go several times faster; and don't forget about the absolute greatest miracle of the modern time, semiconductors and its limitless derivatives: from processors to storage devices to solar panels to LEDs and many other applications wont be possible without it.

Clarke's third law. I know about that. But I'm talking about not needing devices to do all that. Or nanomachines. Either one works lol.

 

[Sullieman]

page 9 also has the problem with "I can help you brat find" that one would make more sense as "I can help a brat like you find"

I changed the line, I think it's closer to the intended meaning in the way I wrote it.

 

[AMicrowave]

I changed the line, I think it's closer to the intended meaning in the way I wrote it.

it's just that it makes less sense structurally in english the way you originally wrote it, sometimes you need to localize a phrase, just never go as far as 4kids did with localization and you'll be a-ok