@Vaan_Aura: Thank you for picking this manga up. Don't get discouraged by the people taking a shit on your typesetting decisions, but they are a bit unappealing to look at. Let me be a prick and point out a few things, that caught my eyes :
[ul][*]Big letters are nice, but don't let them come to close to the bubble borders. While reading one's eyes keep sticking to those close encounters (your text sometimes even do cross the text bubbles borders) and it interrupts fluent reading-flows.
[*]Same goes for unsymmetrical text alignments. Try to keep them centered in the middle of the bubbles. It might help to reduce the text size a bit (Just a bit). You'll gain room to play around with positions of the texts.
[*]Also use capital letters only. Most fonts used for mangas only consist of capital letters and nobody complains.
[*]In fact you should think about using the favored fonts of other groups.
https://www.narga.net/greate-manga-and-comic-fonts/ Most readers know these and they are easy on their eyes.[/ul]
Hope this helps and yield results, that are to your liking. And keep it up, as you can see most people are glad you released a chapter.