you have to remember that the more a character is detailed, the more of a pain it is to draw them.This dragon design was cool. Hoped the first one was cool too instead of being a smooth skin reptile.
Yeah assuming it comes from chan I feel "little" is too strong. I mean she seems to views him as a kid because he looks like one but calling him little constantly is a bit much and I would expect him to be more annoyed by it. Yes chan has some of the subtext but far less strong than "little"I'm gonna guess there were a lot of "-chan"s that all got changed to "little"s in this chapter, huh? I respect the idea, but I think it comes across just as unnatural as if you had left the -chan in. Maybe use it sparingly, and omit it most of the time.