Drama Queen - Ch. 57 - What Do You Take Me For?

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Too convoluted, blegh, you can't throw this many curveballs in a single chapter. It literally made me stop caring. Also wanting to kidnap 4 people to make a specific person kill them sounds fucking stupid. The plan made sense when it was all going down in person and the effort required was low (literally lally having the chick half dead in a bag and telling kitami to finish it at gun point), but repeating it over and over with premeditation is retarded. Lets say Lally pulls it off once, what is he gonna do it again and Kitami is gonna go "ah shit I'm being made to kill my friends with my own hands for the second time!"? The whole plan literally falls apart if Kitami grows the balls to tell Lally to fuck off
 
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Four-eyes getting shot, even if it's not fatal, was satisfying. Kitsch showing up to prove that worthless bastard wrong moments after the lie was a good curveball, and shows that there really are good aliens in this series (even if Kitsch wants to kill off his species for having his tiny snout mocked). Lily♡ is totally going to kill Kitsch though, let's not kid ourselves. Either the series gets axed first, or Kitami is the one to kill Lily♡.
 
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.... the whole god thing sure came out of left field. Exposition city, here we come. It's always been a pet peeve of mine when reading stuff. It's not so much the twist in and of itself, but how it's implemented with a tell, don't show style.

Well, I suppose compromises are inevitable with a weekly series. I'll wait and see how this works.
 
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Oh my God it's so convoluted bruh the glasses guy is a compulsive liar and a manipulative POS nothing convoluted your just dumb and can't follow the story

Lally wants revenge for his shit creepy brother so of course as an alien he's gonna get revenge in his own ways while Kitami being stupid and woke doesn't want to kill Lally

"I stopped caring about the characters and stories" your still here opinion nulled
I'm surprised you understand chainsaw man with such an absurd response cause yeah Chainsaw Man was super Quirky

Of course the glasses guy has a god complex GUYS PAY ATTENTION TO THE STORY I get it America reads at a third grade level but come on
 
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Oh my God it's so convoluted bruh the glasses guy is a compulsive liar and a manipulative POS nothing convoluted your just dumb and can't follow the story

Lally wants revenge for his shit creepy brother so of course as an alien he's gonna get revenge in his own ways while Kitami being stupid and woke doesn't want to kill Lally

"I stopped caring about the characters and stories" your still here opinion nulled
I'm surprised you understand chainsaw man with such an absurd response cause yeah Chainsaw Man was super Quirky

Of course the glasses guy has a god complex GUYS PAY ATTENTION TO THE STORY I get it America reads at a third grade level but come on
If you're gonna spam 'dumb' on everyone who didn't like the chapter, at least have the balls to quote them when you do, buddy. Also, calling the structure of the chapter and Lally's plan convoluted meant they were needlessly complex to the point they hindered the flow and pacing of the chapter, not that I couldn't understand what happened. Ironically, your misunderstanding makes it clear you have the reading comprehension level of a dog.

Oh and commenting on me reading CSM? What, you stalked my profile? Fucking creep behavior. 🤨
 
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If you're gonna spam 'dumb' on everyone who didn't like the chapter, at least have the balls to quote them when you do, buddy. Also, calling the structure of the chapter and Lally's plan convoluted meant they were needlessly complex to the point they hindered the flow and pacing of the chapter, not that I couldn't understand what happened. Ironically, your misunderstanding makes it clear you have the reading comprehension level of a dog.

Oh and commenting on me reading CSM? What, you stalked my profile? Fucking creep behavior. 🤨
How did it hinder the flow and pacing of the chapter? It's not even that complex , glasses guy stopped the virus then lead Lally to Haruo and Kitami. I still think you don't understand if you can't even follow that much. It's not even the whole chapter it's the last few pages explaining what happened and how. The first few pages is glasses guy monologuing how he's God... Not convoluted no hinder nicely paced :huh:

I did mess up not quoting cause my chainsaw man jab was towards
I genuinely stopped caring about the characters and the story, man. This author is larping as Fujimoto going "look how quirky my story is, guys"

But I didn't quote cause I constantly see these types of "can't follow the story" "story so bad" "I stopped caring" my rant was more generalized plus I'm sure commenters are smart enough to know what I'm pointing out :wooow:
 
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How did it hinder the flow and pacing of the chapter? It's not even that complex , glasses guy stopped the virus then lead Lally to Haruo and Kitami. I still think you don't understand if you can't even follow that much. It's not even the whole chapter it's the last few pages explaining what happened and how. The first few pages is glasses guy monologuing how he's God... Not convoluted no hinder nicely paced :huh:

I did mess up not quoting cause my chainsaw man jab was towards


But I didn't quote cause I constantly see these types of "can't follow the story" "story so bad" "I stopped caring" my rant was more generalized plus I'm sure commenters are smart enough to know what I'm pointing out :wooow:
Listen man, I don't give a shit about your rant. Get the fuck outta my notification.
 
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I genuinely stopped caring about the characters and the story, man. This author is larping as Fujimoto going "look how quirky my story is, guys"
[Chapter: end]

"Thank you, drama queen"

"Drama queen?!"

"Because um...you were being a total Drama queen regarding the aliens"

"Oh yeah"

(all the aliens randomly died off panel)
 

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