Ee, Nouryoku Nashi de Party Tsuihousareta Ore ga Zenzokusei Mahoutsukai?! - Ch. 1 - Awaken

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One of the worst mainstream plot ever.
Its always going like :
-Bruv im weak af cuh πŸ’€
-Dayum got betrayed 😭
-Watafa is this bruv wer al da powa comin from πŸ€”
-suddenly got unlimited confidence leave it to me kiddo 😏
-power up level up
-Then later either the mc or fmc fell unconsciousness

Bet next chapter the story goes like
A. The old party found out that he is stronk af and want him back // "Hey you strong because of us!" "Hey how dare you forgetting all our memories and experience just like that"
B. Scheming shit stuff // "Bruv he is dead because he is sacrificing himself for us fake tears"-"Wadehek youre alive?! DEMON!" // "He betraying us and the dragon is his summon! kill him!"

BUT FUK ALLAT ION EVEN HAVE ANYTHIN TO READ ANYMORE SO LETS HOPE THE PLOT IS DIFFERENT THIS TIME
 
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even braindead elementary school kid could be manga author this day geez
just follow the template and viola new unique manga! They didn't think of their buyer as proper consumers, isn't it?
 
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even braindead elementary school kid could be manga author this day geez
just follow the template and viola new unique manga! They didn't think of their buyer as proper consumers, isn't it?
  • MC is incompetent. Somehow is still part of an adventurer party.
  • MC gets betrayed by / fired from party.
  • MC becomes OP because special skill / class: [insert author's power fantasy]
  • MC goes on adventure with new waifu. (alternately a childhood friend who secretly knew MC was special.)
  • Party regrets betraying / firing OP. Either attempts to kill him or gets ridiculed as they lost their chance.
Author: "Totally unique because nobody has ever had the same unique power fantasy I have."

(Though this author is particularly not imaginative. "Having all elements" is so cliche nearly nobody does it anymore, except to make fun of the cliche. Like the reincarnated from that manga where the actual MC only knows "basic" defense magic.)
 
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  • MC is incompetent. Somehow is still part of an adventurer party.
  • MC gets betrayed by / fired from party.
  • MC becomes OP because special skill / class: [insert author's power fantasy]
  • MC goes on adventure with new waifu. (alternately a childhood friend who secretly knew MC was special.)
  • Party regrets betraying / firing OP. Either attempts to kill him or gets ridiculed as they lost their chance.
Author: "Totally unique because nobody has ever had the same unique power fantasy I have."

(Though this author is particularly not imaginative. "Having all elements" is so cliche nearly nobody does it anymore, except to make fun of the cliche. Like the reincarnated from that manga where the actual MC only knows "basic" defense magic.)
Right ! I just read another manga that make fun of "OP with ALL ELEMENT magic" lol lol
and like bruh out of all unique power author could bs into MC skill list.
Author is extremely delusional if he believe giving MC all element and Childhood friend does not betray is considering unique and creative.
 
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Posted my rant on the wrong chapter.
 
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Wow, the red-themed redhead uses water instead of fire. That's as novel as her not immediately backstabbing him. Shame the rest of this was rote as fuck. Skills, because of course. Levels, because of course. Menu notifications, because of course. Random familiar, because of course.
At least the familiar doesn't have a loli form... yet
 
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Hoo? Someone actually stayed behind with the MC? That's a first from all that I've read.
 
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Heh, that's a first. Somebody actually stayed behind with the "useless" party member after being kicked out and sacrificed.

Still though, he just beat a high class monster with Lv.1 magic after just awakening to them? Good 'ol low level OPness lol
 
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I'm like
(Starting story) : kay
(Betrayal) : ohh, now the plot in
(Plot Armor) : lmao XD
 
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I just skimmed through it, guessed the development and was right on the money. How utterly predictable.

Even the overall uncommon development of the childhood actually not being a traitor was just thrown in your face before even reading with the cover art and the summary.

Just another washed up, basic bitch OP MC with no substance so far.

Boring.
 
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So I'm going to give it a shot because the childhood friend didn't betray him, everyone is excited about it for a reason after all.

But this is stupid, this is really stupid. Glasses dude starts by drawing his dual swords to cast a fire ball? What? It's not immediately clear what the magic does for them that still makes them require melee weapons or what the magic does that makes them stronger with melee weapons than mc was without.

The the MC just gets all elements at level one... and proceeds to one shot a boss level enemy way above his level with a level one of a basic element. He's not using some sort of special magic like death or destruction or whatever, he's not using some fusion magic of all the elements, he's just using lighting which should theoretically be inferior to the magic wielded by the woman who trapped him. This was just so mind numbingly stupid that if it wasn't saved by the childhood friend not betraying him I would drop it over this.
 
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😐😐😐😐 i mean I love cats but this... Is something entirely different 😞
 

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