Dex-chan lover
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- Aug 15, 2020
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I've read the first chapter but the storytelling is bad. A betrayal has to be prepared, if it comes out of nowhere we won't care. According to the story, he began weak overall but defeated a monster that a midlevel couldn't, which makes no sense, having all the elements should give him versatility, not power.
I hate this instant OP trope as well. When will writers understand, don't set up conflicts if you gonna solve them in a few minutes. You established him weak, that was the conflict, five minutes later, he's not only strong but OP.
I hate this instant OP trope as well. When will writers understand, don't set up conflicts if you gonna solve them in a few minutes. You established him weak, that was the conflict, five minutes later, he's not only strong but OP.