Eroge Tensei: Unmei ni Aragau Kane Buta Kizoku no Funtouki - Ch. 9 - Saintess Sylvia

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This is not a pet peeve, cuz it's not really a big deal. But note to self when I start writing, I should try to refrain from naming three new places in normal boxes when worldbuilding. I didn't realize how much emphasis my brain puts on the use of different text sizes and alignment. I did not commit the name of that palace nor capital to memory at all on the first try, which I usually would.

A-Building
B-City Municipal Section

C-Police State

That's usually how they look in boxes iirc? Maybe the author just didn't care cuz lol isekai. lmao
 
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I am tired of repeating it but I will comment it again.

He REALLY should be using his energy and effort more on proving his current personality is of someone completely different from that of his former self.

Trying to keep up the act that he is still the same person is the dumbest shit ever and does not help him one bit.
 
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I dont fucking understand the Japanese. They named the character priestess, saintess and any holy-related title but then makes them wear skimpy clothes like they got no stock of usable fabric or some shit.

At this point, i might as well expect to see a prostitute wear fully covered clothes lol
 
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I dont fucking understand the Japanese. They named the character priestess, saintess and any holy-related title but then makes them wear skimpy clothes like they got no stock of usable fabric or some shit.

At this point, i might as well expect to see a prostitute wear fully covered clothes lol
Reminder that this IS the world of an eroge, skimpy clothed women is to be expected, regardless of their profession.
 
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Why does the dialog show that he has no idea that the kid came to see him? In the panel above you can see the father+son apologizing, and you can also see the butler at the house standing next to someone who's clearly Leold, so he was there when the kid apologized. Wonder if it's just a misdrawn panel/mis-TL or something.
TL here. That's my B. I didn't notice the above picture and I had such trouble twisting that sentence into something that sounds halfway normal in English. The literal TL would be "Nobody would until now think something like coming to meet me, right?" and "That made me so happy"
 
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So are we going to just ignore the fact that when the maid is making her report, one of the panels is just a close up of her panties for absolutely no reason?
Obvious sexual fanservice manga based on an eroge has obvious sexual fanservice in it.

 
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manga really move the story fast.
the reason slyvia come to leold and find he diffrent is because leold took impotant role in protect the city and was one of the reason no one die. so the capital invite him back to celebate. slyvia find leold a lot diffrent decide to send isabella here.
in this version she just send isabella intantly.
barbartos confess with isabella happen very later. and was during time when leold situation got a lot more stable so leold decide to go all out with wedding plan which result in the best wedding ever cause he implement a lot of thing from modern world.
and the reason he did all that because barbartos and isabella really stick with him from start so leo feel very indebt to them.


my point that i take to long to reach is that manga pace is too fast. hope it not a ploy to promote LN:meguuusad:
I really hope manga adapt reach the flame emperor fight at least.


btw sylvia isn't a saintress. her power just make the holy nation give her that nickname. she is a princess
PS. is it just me or manga charactor design really hit it home that this is eroge game. cause light novel art slyvia isn't that Busted
 
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Interesting panel that only contains the saintess panties, like do author has to be so obvious about giving fanservice?
 
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TL here. That's my B. I didn't notice the above picture and I had such trouble twisting that sentence into something that sounds halfway normal in English. The literal TL would be "Nobody would until now think something like coming to meet me, right?" and "That made me so happy"
Gotcha, thanks for the clarification. Wasn't sure if it was a TL messup or a manga one, since it wouldn't be the first time I've seen something wonky in a smaller manga like this with reused art/etc.
 
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manga really move the story fast.
the reason slyvia come to leold and find he diffrent is because leold took impotant role in protect the city and was one of the reason no one die. so the capital invite him back to celebate. slyvia find leold a lot diffrent decide to send isabella here.
in this version she just send isabella intantly.
barbartos confess with isabella happen very later. and was during time when leold situation got a lot more stable so leold decide to go all out with wedding plan which result in the best wedding ever cause he implement a lot of thing from modern world.
and the reason he did all that because barbartos and isabella really stick with him from start so leo feel very indebt to them.


my point that i take to long to reach is that manga pace is too fast. hope it not a ploy to promote LN:meguuusad:
I really hope manga adapt reach the flame emperor fight at least.


btw sylvia isn't a saintress. her power just make the holy nation give her that nickname. she is a princess
PS. is it just me or manga charactor design really hit it home that this is eroge game. cause light novel art slyvia isn't that Busted
The author has confirmed that the manga version will emphasize the ecchi part. Well, I don't really like about character designs in the manga ~_~

Regarding Isabel, in LN its explained why Sylvia sent Isabel at the beginning of the novel (Chapter 1)

(Different from WN)
 
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Why does the dialog show that he has no idea that the kid came to see him? In the panel above you can see the father+son apologizing, and you can also see the butler at the house standing next to someone who's clearly Leold, so he was there when the kid apologized. Wonder if it's just a misdrawn panel/mis-TL or something.
The raw actually said something like "No one would've thought anyone will come to apologize to me, right? that's why I am really happy that happened"
Edit : ah, just saw a real translator appeared and answered the doubt lol. I should've read all page before replying
 
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Wait, so this takes place after he did all the horrible shit? Not the current him I mean but the past him. Someone told me otherwise wtf
From what I got from the comments is that he was abusive but he didn't do rape like the game yet before the Mc reincarnated in his body
 
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I dont fucking understand the Japanese. They named the character priestess, saintess and any holy-related title but then makes them wear skimpy clothes like they got no stock of usable fabric or some shit.

At this point, i might as well expect to see a prostitute wear fully covered clothes lol
She's not a literal saintess, as nominated by a religion. She's wielding divine magic to protect the whole country, so people just call her a saintess. Reading between the lines, I actually consider her pornographic dress quite an interesting detail. She's obviously sexually frustrated, but has no way whatsoever to relieve it sufficiently. Her bloodline magic is of strategic importance, so she definitely won't be married off anywhere, which might be a factor in her own musings of feeling like she's sacrificing herself for her nation. She's a royal princess, with the fame of a saintess, so I doubt the king would allow her any dalliances. From all of this one could deduce her outfit is her way of expressing her inhibited sexual desire.
 

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