Fantasy Bishoujo Juniku Ojisan to - Vol. 14 Ch. 204 - Fabiniku Ojisan And The Duel

[saredesu]

"I'm not gay, they are"
Proceeds to have the most straight competition


Thank you for the massive, massive update. Plus TGI Friday today, what a great day. I have long weekend this week to boot.

 

[Bootybug]

What a feast this was

 

[hsun]

WHERE IS MY TACHIBANA(girl) x JINGUUJI(girl)?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

 

[Hikineet]

Thanks for the chapters.

 

[jasty]

I hope they fuck soon and have lots of babies. Tachibana will be an excellent wife and mother.

 

[Darklight99]

I'm finally getting what I love the most, it was torture for such a long time. But it's finally here again.
This is why I love GB

 

[popo53414]

 

[Snurt]

"her gender is up to the read3r its just a comedy manga."

Ah yes, using some masculine personal pronouns (boku and ore, something that tomboys use and isnt that unusual) vs

Im not really a man.
I want to be your girlfriend
I want to be a girl again
A complete insistence on being a girl even though the guy shes in love would definitely like her as her original self.

Thanks for the translation but i do have to laugh at the idea that her gender is remotely unclear

 

[NhifanHafizh]

They just need to get married, have segg, and create a happy family. Is it that hard??

 

[thedestroyership]

Well hot damn, C107 After story doujins otw

 

[Uof]

Flirting fight let’s goooo!!! They’re so fucking cute!!!

 

[Dianixi]

There's a lot in this batch of chapters that could use the help of a proofreader who is a native English speaker, as some of the phrasings I see read like overly direct translations from Japanese, which doesn't always provide grammatically correct or pleasant-to-read English. Some specific examples from this chapter:

Page 3: "Well, since the challenge is thrown - accepted" is not proper English. Try "Well, since the gauntlet has been thrown down, I accept"
Page 4: Based on the images on the next page, "maybe have him lay his head on my lap and gently call me" is mistranslated. It should be "Maybe I'll have him offer his lap as a pillow and gently tell me..."
Page 6: "... Bad" should be "This is bad." Also, "'set' of behavior" is clunky phrasing that reads awkwardly to any native speaker. try "The problem is, I don't have any other tricks up my sleeve to charm him."
Page 12: "Bringing face so close... right now... we'll almost touch..." needs rewording. Try "Bringing your face so close to mine... you know, it's like we're about to kiss"

Yeah, maybe it's good idea, do a bit editing from a native speakers... because for me these phases are ok. Will ask in discord, thanks for feedback

 

[kitsushouten]

i really hate where the series ends up after this? HUGE spoilers if you don’t know.

tachibana almost dies and jinguuji basically sacrifices his earthly memories of them together to bring her back from death. it’s depressing.

 

[AGeneric_Gamer]

The strongest of today vs the weakest in history

 

[Phantommemorial]

Truly, this has become my favorite arc
GO GET HIM TACHIBANA!

 

[Trazel_Apeally]

I feel Ch.200 established Tachibana's gender identity pinpointedly, with everything prior reasonably unsure, but regardless it's so awesome to have had such a great time with their journeys thus far.

i really hate where the series ends up after this? HUGE spoilers if you don’t know.

Spoiler

tachibana almost dies and jinguuji basically sacrifices his earthly memories of them together to bring her back from death. it’s depressing.

Jinguuji going the extra step and removing any shot of accidentally "deadnaming" Tachibana's appearance.
(lol)
Sad surely, but metaphorically it sounds badass on his part, also a testament to their bond <3

 

[SomeGuy10002]

Sex battle

 

[maindish]

Did their couple antics make them forget about Shen? Sure he'll take this all well.

 

[habla]

WHERE'S MY TACHIBANA(girl) x JINGUUJI(girl)?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

it should have been girl jinguuji x me

 

[galaxia9]

It's a flirt to the death. First kiss chicken, then teasing proposals, wedding headgames and on to kids. Only then shall a winner be decided. It's us, we win.