The translations really off. The titles wrong. I'm guessing it is something to do with hair going down to your feet. Why would she tell him to cut her hair then ask why she shouldn't go to the parlor? everything about the continuity is wrong. "doesn't being neglected in taking care of clean hair make you a failure as a hair fetishist" like it should be "doesn't neglecting cleaning and taking care of my hair means you're failing as someone with a hair fetish". There more but I don't what to pile on.
Not a bad first go but not great overall. Keep trying you will get better with time.
To everyone else just wait for Bolt scans.