Oh no! how dare they set up the setting and characters in Chapter 1 so readers know the main motivations of the protagonist! this is so ass!!!!!!!!!As an exercise:
- Summarize this chapter; then
- Look at the number of pages used to deliver that much story.
Go ahead: Summarize the setting and characters, and again look at the number of pages used to establish the setting and characters.Oh no! how dare they set up the setting and characters in Chapter 1 so readers know the main motivations of the protagonist! this is so ass!!!!!!!!!
This isn’t TikTok though, not being adhd accessible doesn’t make it bad.Go ahead: Summarize the setting and characters, and again look at the number of pages used to establish the setting and characters.
Implying that people who aren't as 'luded-out as you have ADHD is absurd.This isn’t TikTok though, not being adhd accessible doesn’t make it bad.
It's so bad that you've tried to slip-in an under-counting.Yes it did take 50 pages to establish that
Most of them dragged-on.none of those pages dragged on
You should have learned the difference between “then” and “than”, even if no one gave you a long, slow booklet on the subject.which is more then most manga can do
kImplying that people who aren't as 'luded-out as you have ADHD is absurd.
It's so bad that you've tried to slip-in an under-counting.
Most of them dragged-on.
You should have learned the difference between “then” and “than”, even if no one gave you a long, slow booklet on the subject.
Anyway, crud isn't justified by pointing to more crud; otherwise, all crud would be justified, since (as Sturgeon noted) 90% of every genre is crud.