Friedrich's Battlefield - Ch. 1 - The End of a Boring Life

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Seems really edgy, I hope it doesn't get too much worse than this. Besides some of the dialogue the rest is kinda okay.
 
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Is it gonna be more cringe or not? Only the newest chapter will reveal it.

Thanks for the translation!
 
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i legit thought that the girl was gonna get killed by the bandits and that was gonna be his motivation from reading the synopsis. im glad she didnt die in the first chapter at least and also she is hot so it would have sucked.
 
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As an exercise:
  1. Summarize this chapter; then
  2. Look at the number of pages used to deliver that much story.
 
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I like this one, will be looking forward to the next chapters :win:
 
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This seems very interesting, thank you for translating it! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
 
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As an exercise:
  1. Summarize this chapter; then
  2. Look at the number of pages used to deliver that much story.
Oh no! how dare they set up the setting and characters in Chapter 1 so readers know the main motivations of the protagonist! this is so ass!!!!!!!!!
 
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Oh no! how dare they set up the setting and characters in Chapter 1 so readers know the main motivations of the protagonist! this is so ass!!!!!!!!!
Go ahead: Summarize the setting and characters, and again look at the number of pages used to establish the setting and characters.
 
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after reading an illogical expelled s-rank adventurer trash story, this is quite a feast! I dont mind if its introductions! I wanna read moar
 
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Go ahead: Summarize the setting and characters, and again look at the number of pages used to establish the setting and characters.
This isn’t TikTok though, not being adhd accessible doesn’t make it bad.

Yes it did take 50 pages to establish that but none of those pages dragged on which is more then most manga can do
 
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This isn’t TikTok though, not being adhd accessible doesn’t make it bad.
Implying that people who aren't as 'luded-out as you have ADHD is absurd.
Yes it did take 50 pages to establish that
It's so bad that you've tried to slip-in an under-counting.
none of those pages dragged on
Most of them dragged-on.
which is more then most manga can do
You should have learned the difference between “then” and “than”, even if no one gave you a long, slow booklet on the subject.

Anyway, crud isn't justified by pointing to more crud; otherwise, all crud would be justified, since (as Sturgeon noted) 90% of every genre is crud.
 
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Implying that people who aren't as 'luded-out as you have ADHD is absurd.

It's so bad that you've tried to slip-in an under-counting.

Most of them dragged-on.

You should have learned the difference between “then” and “than”, even if no one gave you a long, slow booklet on the subject.

Anyway, crud isn't justified by pointing to more crud; otherwise, all crud would be justified, since (as Sturgeon noted) 90% of every genre is crud.
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