Full Clearing Another World under a Goddess with Zero Believers - Vol. 6 Ch. 32 - Makoto Takatsuki Fights Alongside The Princess and Friends

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Then I want to report a missing page, I think:
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Many thanks for the chapter.
thx. fixed.
 
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I mean all that lewd hand holding takes a lot of willpower so it is an understandable outcome. Thanks for the chapter.
Imagine all the babies she's expecting now. 3? Or is it 1 + 2 + 4 = 7 babies? That coldhearted gamer skill is dangerous, as they can accidentally hold hands as much as needed, and not notice until they deactivate it.
 
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Did the art seem pretty poor to anyone else? There's bad consistency for characters especially in perspective, and there was very little sense of motion or movement even in big moments with spells.
 
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Did the art seem pretty poor to anyone else? There's bad consistency for characters especially in perspective, and there was very little sense of motion or movement even in big moments with spells.
That felt quite deliberate to pace with the novel; as I recall, it was very much just a series of repeated casts with little happening otherwise, externally.
 
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This is part of a long list of oddities the harem in this story has cuz of the author's waffling. From the afterwords in the LN, the intention for her was just for her to look down on him and for the mc to show her up and be done with it but they thought she was cute so she became a harem member. It came off as so weird because all her criticisms of the mc (even in the web novel) had always just been things the mc would say about himself to others. "don't expect much, water mages are weak." "don't expect much, we water mages are weak." That kinda thing. Even having a similar skill, they wrote her to be basically a mirror image of the mc.

Now, the decisions the author made with the next two are just fucking depressing by comparison.
 
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This is part of a long list of oddities the harem in this story has cuz of the author's waffling. From the afterwords in the LN, the intention for her was just for her to look down on him and for the mc to show her up and be done with it but they thought she was cute so she became a harem member. It came off as so weird because all her criticisms of the mc (even in the web novel) had always just been things the mc would say about himself to others. "don't expect much, water mages are weak." "don't expect much, we water mages are weak." That kinda thing. Even having a similar skill, they wrote her to be basically a mirror image of the mc.

Now, the decisions the author made with the next two are just fucking depressing by comparison.

the back and forth that was Furiae even before starting to write, AND after writing the WN AND the changed in the LN to adjust what was made in WN contradicting what was decided on the draft of the series ahhahaha XD.....

I mean he was one of those authors that heavily molded his story telling according to the feedback of the ppl and we can see the good and the bad out of it.

And yeah the other princess might be even more confusing hahahah XD
 
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I don’t like where this is going, he shouldnt be giving her the time of day after how she treated him, but with the goddess pushing for it so hard and plot making excuses for her at the speed of light it’s looking like she’ll join the harem.
 
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I don’t like where this is going, he shouldnt be giving her the time of day after how she treated him, but with the goddess pushing for it so hard and plot making excuses for her at the speed of light it’s looking like she’ll join the harem.
I don't think it's so bad. Most of the bad things she said are things the mc says himself. Water mages are seen as weak, herself included, and the mc shares that view. His complaints about being abandoned are also false. She told him that he had to train more if he wanted the blessing, that's it. He still lived in the castle for a year or two and studied under their trainers, he was just told he couldn't get what he wanted from her until he trained more.
 
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This is the part where I dropped the novel. The terror scream on a lava giant is such a convenient mechanic to kick out unimportant characters, and the super duper magic spam is mostly fluff. The pre-lava giant fight had waaaay more tactical importance, but lava giant is just an excuse for horny.
 
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I don't think it's so bad. Most of the bad things she said are things the mc says himself. Water mages are seen as weak, herself included, and the mc shares that view. His complaints about being abandoned are also false. She told him that he had to train more if he wanted the blessing, that's it. He still lived in the castle for a year or two and studied under their trainers, he was just told he couldn't get what he wanted from her until he trained more.
I guess what the MC was most pissed off was because he was rly scared at the time and no one was giving him a hand at all. Noah was the first one that had faith in him and all....
 
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This is the part where I dropped the novel. The terror scream on a lava giant is such a convenient mechanic to kick out unimportant characters, and the super duper magic spam is mostly fluff. The pre-lava giant fight had waaaay more tactical importance, but lava giant is just an excuse for horny.
yeah you have a point. Little by little the battles will lose that smart factor that used to have in the begining, but to me other things were starting to be appealing and keeping me on the series honestly. There will still be clever batltes but yeah...
 
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I guess what the MC was most pissed off was because he was rly scared at the time and no one was giving him a hand at all. Noah was the first one that had faith in him and all....
That's kinda the thing though and what makes me like him a little less as an mc. He did get a hand, it just wasn't the benefit he wanted or that some of his classmates got. He wasn't kicked out on the street right away like what usually happens, they housed and taught him till he could manage a bit on his own. I feel like his bitterness creates an unfair image of her, especially since they would just be male/female counterparts of each other if his death was quicker and he got the water monarch skill.
 
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That's kinda the thing though and what makes me like him a little less as an mc. He did get a hand, it just wasn't the benefit he wanted or that some of his classmates got. He wasn't kicked out on the street right away like what usually happens, they housed and taught him till he could manage a bit on his own. I feel like his bitterness creates an unfair image of her, especially since they would just be male/female counterparts of each other if his death was quicker and he got the water monarch skill.
I think he did was abandoned, but it was a different perspective. Every single one of the reincarnates was recruited by other nations, and he was the only one that was ignored and left there for his own luck you know... I think his bitterness in a way is justified.
 

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