Fullswing - Oneshot

[MangaDex]

 

[deathmine31]

Compared to the other oneshot of a father spending time with his daughter at a batting center, this one is so lacking in depth.

 

[genR]

Feels a bit lacking as a standalone. More like initial setup, setting a mood in the first pages of a longer work.

Also, I'm not tripping, her elbow is bending the wrong way on page 4, right ?

 

[olivetho]

Compared to the other oneshot of a father spending time with his daughter at a batting center, this one is so lacking in depth.

care to enlighten me?

 

[Junpaku]

Feels a bit lacking as a standalone. More like initial setup, setting a mood in the first pages of a longer work.

Also, I'm not tripping, her elbow is bending the wrong way on page 4, right ?

No, she's just doing an awkward pose that's gonna lead to tendonitis in the elbow and/or shoulder if she keeps it up.