I wanna say they look off-model, but there isn't really a model, is there, they're just drawn however the fuck. Her hair changes colour, her tits are of whatever size the author felt like at the time, so are his limbs. I'm getting a full lesson on why hate-reading is dumb and bad for you, and I can only hope most people learn that lesson one way or another, it's no way to read/watch/play shit.
Pretty sure that's also a record low amount of russian usage. What is there is still mostly cringe.
page 6 - actually a proper use of the word, which directly translates to "quietly", but it is exactly the russian equivalent of "be quiet" or "shush". No complaints.
page 12 - "yes", no notes
page 15 - "adult", but specifically single unspecified/male. Once again using the default grammatical case instead of the appropriate one. Sounds weird af.
page 20 - "hot", IGMS, the works. Also doesn't fit, because in russian this word refers specifically to hot (too hot to touch) temperatures as well as "hot people", the word that fits here is "жарко", grammatically related to the russian equivalent of "heat" instead of "hot", meaning "it's hot", referring to the general surroundings/atmosphere, as well as one's wellbeing.
page 26 - "yes", no notes