Gal Gohan - Vol. 10 Ch. 68 - Gal Gohan

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This series started off strong but didn't really keep the momentum. Still a cute read overall. Thank you for scanlating to the end!!
 
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That was a pretty good ending and basically what I hopped for. Makes me sad that its over (even though everyone was saying 69 chapters unless 69 is like an omake or some shit), but I'm glad I read it, its just that I don't know why but Fujiwara made the story a little worse, not because she existed cause I did like her character, but she was set to fail from the point of introduction which kind of sucks. The teacher at least had her chance and failed. She was if anything someone who helped Miku get closer to Yabe. Maybe most people don't mind doing that to characters, but I somehow feel bad for people who ain't e ven real
 
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Well, it feels kinda rushed. Because, if only author can balanced between romance and cooking stuff, like how their relationship developed, especially in Yabe perspective, this manga can actually last long. But instead focusing on their development in right way, author choose to push the development into crappy harem stories. For me, thats the real problem begin. Author can literally focused on two of them, with story can be expand to their personal problem and their club problem (for example, how can they recruit more members for the club). But yeah, again author choose the cheapest way to handle it, Harem..

Even the ending quite lack luster TBH. I mean, we got only 20 page, We got their wedding scene and we got Mikus pregnant moment. But WTF with those flashback. Author can literally delete those flashback, and put the pregnant scene in that part, and put the time skip where they have children at the end of the chapter. But well, its what author give, we just can say yes. Quite disappointed? Yes. But at least it ended pretty well.

Dunno, this is just my opinion.
 
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The ending was very enjoyable. 8/10. Manga had its ups and downs but most of them do, so w/e.
 
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Perhaps grooming is the more extreme term, but he still has a power dynamic against her and they basically started the romance whilst she was a minor. He had several basically sexual encounters, even if started by her, continuing to be around her, and not do something with a child persuing him (aside from just getting all "w-woah!") That's improper behavior as an adult, marrying someone you knew when they were that young is disgusting.
 

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