Gal & Hamu-chan - Oneshot

[MangaDex]

 

[dw123456]

https://imgur.com/HJFEVIz

 

[Lilathealpha]

https://imgur.com/HJFEVIz

Yeah I just need to take the safe way out instead of trying to word it weirdly; I might change it, but the chances are low

 

[faaresemo]

page 2, last square bubble
I think it's meant to be "me and" rather than "my", based off the context

 

[Lilathealpha]

page 2, last square bubble
I think it's meant to be "me and" rather than "my", based off the context

You are completely right I look over it since it is a cut-off 😭/fixed
+grammatically speaking, it would be incorrect also

 

[EchoGirl]

Cute! (now that i think about it, while some classmates were rowdy i never saw much running in the hallways then again they didn't rly care about being late haha)

You wrote "Bamu" on page 10 instead of hamu

wonder if it'll get a serialization

 

[Lilathealpha]

Cute! (now that i think about it, while some classmates were rowdy i never saw much running in the hallways then again they didn't rly care about being late haha)

You wrote "Bamu" on page 10 instead of hamu

wonder if it'll get a serialization

Idk why I did that haha /fixed

 

[xanon]

Yep, definitely cute. Didn't know Atlas was such a jerk though.

 

[UdenEmpati]

Short and sweet. Just like Hamu-chan.

I think p.11, panel 2 should say "But, alas, I'm like this". 'Atlas' as both a noun (the collection of maps of the world) and a proper noun (the mythical figure that held the sky on his shoulders) doesn't make sense here, even as she's very tall.

Otherwise great TL work. Thanks for bringing this to us.

 

[Lilathealpha]

Short and sweet. Just like Hamu-chan.

I think p.11, panel 2 should say "But, alas, I'm like this". 'Atlas' as both a noun (the collection of maps of the world) and a proper noun (the mythical figure that held the sky on his shoulders) doesn't make sense here, even as she's very tall.

Otherwise great TL work. Thanks for bringing this to us.

I did not make a spelling mistake
I did not make a spelling mistake
I did not make a spelling mistake
hypnotizing it’s not working I need to go back to grade school /fixed

 

[WhimsiCat]

Not sure it TL is aware, but just in case:

Might be better to TL her nickname as Ham-chan, since it's from 'hamster'

 

[alfirizkyr]

Opposites attract! Maybe not a serialization, but they attracted each other at least.

That was cute. Had it bookmarked on my Library for a while and I didn't even remember when, lol. Thanks for the TL!

 

[Kyuketsuki]

Was hoping for smol girl and beeg buff tomboy yuri.

 

[NIPHY]

Where's the rest of it? You don't mean to tell me that's was all?