Gal to Iinchou ga Guuzen Saikai suru Hanashi - Ch. 17

[Trevoga]

You know, considering how quickly it all seemed to be wrapped up, it's been done with a neat bow. For what the manga is, which is FINE, the ending doesn't disappoint. Unless you were hoping for the good shit, in which case you should probably read things from the beginning.

 

[Fushiginiku]

Well, it was an excellent showpiece for the artist's work. Now someone needs to pair them up with a good script writer.

 

[Kushikime]

Thanks for the chapters and all the work.

 

[Lynkaster]

so much potential wasted...

 

[Purplelibraryguy]

OK, that was disappointing. And I mean, it's not like you can't have a story about friendship . . . but frankly, this did not start out as one of those, the signals were pretty clear early on. If you're gonna bait and switch, the switch had better be really amazing and convince me that was what they had in mind the whole time just to do an especially awesome switch-y thing. Not what happened here.
Failure of nerve? Loss of time? Author suddenly realized they weren't feeling the chemistry and tried to paint their way out of a corner? Don't care enough to speculate very hard.

 

[XenoAshura]

is that it?

 

[niteman555]

You're exactly correct, which is weird that the series even got this bad in the first place. So I looked it up and it seems to be published in the indies section of Shonen Jump Plus, which has no editor.
So yeah, the author is their own editor. Checks out.

That's unfortunate for the author. Editors do so much to enable an author's success that if the author actually had one, it would have been a failure on the editor's part to support them.

 

[Othingl]

Well, I guess it's time to use this again...

 

[StormCenter]

Was this manga cancelled?

 

[Wachtail]

Good art and that was it, sadly.
Felt like it could've been so much more (in a yuri sense), but then the story shifted.
I wasn't bad, just very damn mid.
Thanks for the translation and your hardwork!

 

[CrowIsAsleep123]

Definitely feels like it got axed which is unfortunate since I feel like it could have been a decent story. Felt I like it needed a couple more volumes worth of story to get there though. So now it is just a very mid story.

Honestly I think it was axed early on and the author had to seriously pivot the story, hence the messy ending.

Thank you for the translation. At least we got some closer on this one regardless of how it went.

 

[RoyYamaha]

that's it?

 

[N2O]

Wtf? where's the romance?

 

[Blergggg]

Very cute and wholesome good story and thanks so much for finishing the translation. HOWEVER there was no damn Yuri in this Yuri manga! 😭