Garuru Girl - Vol. 3 Ch. 17

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  • I thought that was a timeskip for a second there...
  • Obviously rushed, complete with shounen physics. I don't mind that actually.
  • Somehow he can actually give up being a rabbit after turning into one, and she can control her powers now after all this drama? To be honest that's pretty weak.
So yeah, a bit of an unsatisfying ending. I also didn't know the author asked for help here in the comments section... so I hope I didn't come across as too harsh if they ran across my comments.

EDIT: The strike reactors do NOT help the author become a better writer.
 
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Good work, and I'm glad the author got to wrap up the story in a satisfying and beautiful way. The art has always been good but this chapter had a bunch of really standout panels even then, I guess they wanted to put in some extra effort and it shows. Thanks for everyone involved.
 
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  • I thought that was a timeskip for a second there...
  • Obviously rushed, complete with shounen physics. I don't mind that actually.
  • Somehow he can actually give up being a rabbit after turning into one, and she can control her powers now after all this drama? To be honest that's pretty weak.
So yeah, a bit of an unsatisfying ending. I also didn't know the author asked for help here in the comments section... so I hope I didn't come across as too harsh if they ran across my comments.
Trust me, I was preparing to write a full essay on how flawed this chapter was, but in the end I figured "what else could you do when you're told you got cancelled 3 chapters in?" The writing isn't the best, but that's to be expected when you script and draw your own stuff, something has to give (Unlike stories with a writer and an artist doing their separate jobs). This manga was just the victim of the mainstream industry nowadays, which is sad but it is what it is.
 

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