Giri Choko Girai no Futari - Ch. 6 - The Way to Make You Smile

[W-Scarecrow]

Making food with someone is my love language

 

[MaCl0wSt]

Thanks for the chapter!

 

[davep99]

That ain't how it works. Reach out if you need to talk

 

[daniel_zaslav]

Thank you for the translation <3

 

[banneret]

Illegally wholesome scenes, 15 yard penalty, replay 1st down

 

[wallsg]

On page 9 one text bubble says "Chop the grass noodles". I have no proficiency in Japanese so I can't double check against the raws, but I wanted to confirm that this isn't supposed to be "Glass noodles" (a common ingredient in Thai spring rolls) rather than "grass noodles"?

Maybe he was trying to translate it phonetically...

 

[henman]

I like this chapter too. It was so cute and fluffy

 

[SilverSupreme]

I’m very happy to see this return. That said, there are some minor translation issues and grammatical issues that interrupt the flow of dialogue.

“artiste” on page 1, “senapi” on page 4, “too luxury” on page 6. What I assume are direct translations on page 14 also read a bit robotic.
Past tense mixed with present tense in panel 1, “here is ootsuki-senpai canteen” in panel 2, “I’ll consume food” in panel 3. There are much more minor issues elsewhere that don’t really break syntax or halt the flow enough to be noticed unless you seek them out.

I’m mentioning this as positive criticism so that minor things like these might be avoided in future releases if you choose to continue. Thank you for your work.

 

[dudelookatree]

Chop the ass noodles

 

[adm0726]

They say the ticket to a mans heart is food but ig that applies to girls too

 

[WiseMansBlood]

ohh damn this shit is so cute and good and sugeryyyyy aaaaaaargghhhh

 

[spiffinn]

Thanks for the update!!!

 

[hurriquinne]

Where can I read the remaining chapters?

 

[jackalan]

She's a keeper when you know she loves (good) food and you do (and make good food) too 😎

 

[634]

He gonna be an iron chef for her.