Try centering the text more to make it more pleasing to the eye. Also, try keeping the text in the same shape of the bubble when typesetting the chapters. Good effort, not like we own the manga, so just do what you want, everyone here after all is a pirate xD. Also, don’t reference the novel for translations, you can use the naming, but overall the manhua will change the meaning and events to make it better in a manhua format. Overall, if you’re look for a “job” per say, as you getting paid, Odyssey ain’t got the budget to do that xD. Literally is a hobby for all of us, we can’t/don’t make money out of this. Keep trying to improve your technique, and try switching up fonts for normal text, sound effects and shouting text! One last thing, it’s rude and not commonly accepted to “snipe” which is publishing or working on chapters done by a different group. Some people have plenty of issues with it, so try to be careful xD.