80% wrongly translated (rewritten)... example: "So, since it was my first wand in a while, I had to regain my intuition." not "Maybe this could also be a good opportunity to practice my spear skills after not practicing them for a long time"... so much rewrite... and so badly done... the soup is very creany and delicious not the most delicious... honstly fixing all errors would be the same as redoing this chapter seems like they stopped caring about staying true to the raws and do whatever the fuck they want now...