Goshujin-sama to Yuku Isekai Survival! - Vol. 8 Ch. 45

[DementisXYZ]

Oh. Well you'll have to forgive me for that. I don't recall everyone of his sexual escapades so I'm mainly just noting the visual indicator of a dropping flower paired with the goatse he experienced last chapter.

... took me a while, but I'm guessing now that you're trying to infer about the anal attack. In that case, no. I thought you were talking about his overall virginity. My bad.

 

[popmol]

thanks for the new chapter i thought i had to wait a long time just because last one was slime hentai!

 

[baconcat]

Whoa, whoa, whoa, easy there, no need to rush.

wilder
ness

Where's the hyphen?

Kousuke it's a rare and unique person

"it's"?

I talked quite a lot my throat got dry.

Forgot a comma?

This is gizma meat when we defeated those gizmas

Well, yes, gizma meat comes from gizmas. And there's at least one preposition missing.

consume those meat raw

"those meat"?

serio-
usly

Seriously?

norm-
ally

No.

Explaining is not suitable for lime

You mean, explaining is not one of Lime's strengths?

Melinesburg

Melinsburg

Decide on a spelling already, will you?

Merinard

Couldn't it rather be Merinesburg then?

[the kingdom] was not a multi-racial nation like the empire

I thought the kingdom was and the empire wasn't? Genuinely not sure, though it doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the text.

But the number was clear.

The numbers were clear. Plural is more natural.

refre-
shing

Again, no.

If Sylphy haven't been training

Hadn't.

That possibility isn't impossible.

This notice of the Department of Redundancy Department notice noticed to you by the notice of the Department of Redundancy Department notice.

It seems like they were […], aren't they

Watch the tempus!

It's propaganda too weaken people's morale to rebel.

wat in the wat

a rebellion that occurred regardless the existence

They probably rebelled against this sentence …

Little Gunfun

Little what now?

the pervious king

As in the opposite of "impervious"?

throw that stuff

carry and collect them

when it piles up

we collect them

Stuff is uncountable, so, they'd collect it.

come to think of it you 3 let your guard down

Comma missing; also, in prose, "3" is spelt out as "three".

the strongest in physical power in terms of the variables of viscosity and hardness

Those too many words are too many words that are too many words.

she's good in water magic as I am

The first "as" is missing. The phrase is "as good as".

disman-
tling

Sadly, this is documented as correct, as stupid as it looks. I'd have chosen to use a different word or phrase, though, if only to avoid repetition in the text on the button and the dialog right next to each other. Say, "take apart" or "break down".

disapp-
eared

Nothing to do with ears on apps. Split between double consonants.

the clay. Where to obtain them?

Clay is uncountable. Obtain it.

I think Lime, who patrols not only the sewers, but also the underground passages.

I think Lime would also know how to form a complete sentence …

sudd-
enly

Double. Consonants.


So, for the previous chapter I said I didn't regret my choice to read yours over GD's.

This here is just completely avoidable, rushed garbage that made me regret my lack of regret over my earlier choice. I don't mind genuine mistakes, they happen, but this here is some half-assed word puke that is sorely disappointing.

Take your time, or you'll just be sniping for sniping's sake. You're still supposed to have fun with this hobby. You should make it something actually worth being proud of, rather than just a pisstake at someone else. It'll remain on the internet for everyone to see for a while, you know?

this chapter you have produced is defiantly better quality than your last upload.

defiantly

Why do I have the nagging doubt about you being qualified to render judgment on that …?

 

[myok]

^^^^ this

Also "face" should probably be "vase" in the first panel of page four. You know, the giant panel that shows a picture of a vase. Though I guess Melty's face is in it too.

 

[Grabzky]

I begin to think that tl-san want to kill our braincells

 

[HDMI1]

"Hey, why does this aromatic gas smell like almonds?..."

 

[baconcat]

"Hey, why does this aromatic gas smell like almonds?..."

It's not against any religion
to want to dispose of a pigeon.

 

[AkaZePanda]

wait what? What happened?

You know what i mean, the usual WORKS by D

 

[tibz]

I miss crafting, why's it always gotta be fetish posting?

 

[KittyBlue9]

Whoa, whoa, whoa, easy there, no need to rush.


Where's the hyphen?


"it's"?


Forgot a comma?


Well, yes, gizma meat comes from gizmas. And there's at least one preposition missing.


"those meat"?


Seriously?


No.


You mean, explaining is not one of Lime's strengths?



Decide on a spelling already, will you?


Couldn't it rather be Merinesburg then?


I thought the kingdom was and the empire wasn't? Genuinely not sure, though it doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the text.


The numbers were clear. Plural is more natural.


Again, no.


Hadn't.


This notice of the Department of Redundancy Department notice noticed to you by the notice of the Department of Redundancy Department notice.


Watch the tempus!


wat in the wat


They probably rebelled against this sentence …


Little what now?


As in the opposite of "impervious"?





Stuff is uncountable, so, they'd collect it.


Comma missing; also, in prose, "3" is spelt out as "three".


Those too many words are too many words that are too many words.


The first "as" is missing. The phrase is "as good as".


Sadly, this is documented as correct, as stupid as it looks. I'd have chosen to use a different word or phrase, though, if only to avoid repetition in the text on the button and the dialog right next to each other. Say, "take apart" or "break down".


Nothing to do with ears on apps. Split between double consonants.


Clay is uncountable. Obtain it.


I think Lime would also know how to form a complete sentence …


Double. Consonants.


So, for the previous chapter I said I didn't regret my choice to read yours over GD's.

This here is just completely avoidable, rushed garbage that made me regret my lack of regret over my earlier choice. I don't mind genuine mistakes, they happen, but this here is some half-assed word puke that is sorely disappointing.

Take your time, or you'll just be sniping for sniping's sake. You're still supposed to have fun with this hobby. You should make it something actually worth being proud of, rather than just a pisstake at someone else. It'll remain on the internet for everyone to see for a while, you know?




Why do I have the nagging doubt about you being qualified to render judgment on that …?

Revised. Kindly refresh page to see changes. Thanks for pointing them out.

Edit: It's not my first time to have typos/grammar errors when translating. When someone points them out in the comments, I revise them to further improve the translation quality. I really appreciate folks like you for doing that. Thanks.

 

[ItsThatBriGuy]

It's not against any religion
to want to dispose of a pigeon.

Second most random Tom Lehrer reference I've heard today. (Right behind a long quote from The Old Dope Peddler in the middle of some rap joint.) Noice.

 

[ismaelh]

TL seems rushed but understandable. Most of this stuff can be fixed with grammar/spelling checker.

Now I just need GDs tl to crosscheck

 

[Xnagos]

wait what? What happened?

Galaxy degen takes on a tremendous number of series and often stops uploading on several of them and whenever someone tries to take over the spam a few chapters to get rid of the competition. After this it's back to no chapters again to try and force readers to either pay them to read it from them or give up reading the series since they scare away their competition with the chapters they hoard and spit out whenever others show up.

 

[nathan67003]

"What happened to that flower in the face"? Really? Come on man, I know you wanna explode GDS' kneecaps but you'll need to at least one-up them on the quality side to do that

 

[Xnagos]

I wish snipers would put their efforts towards manga that don't have groups translating them.

Yeah cause degen totally wasn't about to seal this away in the vault for all eternity like their other series.

 

[bonerland]

I will never be raped to sleep by slime-girls, why even live ;__;

 

[KuroViLolitannia]

Sigh....
type slime monster girl english

 

[SifTheFair]

Getting raped is a-ok author, really ?
First with the harpies now slimes. And we just move on as if it didn't happen and then make a bed out of slime to make a repeat of the rape.
I kinda understand why he stopped this project and moved on another

 

[welcome2atlantis]

Where is that "It should've been me, not him!" meme when I need it.

 

[Zael]

I will never be raped to sleep by slime-girls, why even live ;__;

You could be out there researching how to create them in reality...