Goshujin-sama to Yuku Isekai Survival! - Vol. 8 Ch. 45

[vergotear]

@KittyBlue9

Page 6 I can't go on like this anymore. => I can't be a groom anymore.
Totally missed Kosuke's version of the "I can't be a bride anymore" joke there.

Page 24
We are not contractually allowed to step outside the castle grounds. (stays the same)
Ever since the Holy Kingdom took over, the demi-humans are unable to get close to this "girl" => Ever since the Holy Kingdom took over, the demi-humans can't come near the castle thou.
Little Gunfun => Fighting Alone... (Kogunfuntou = 孤軍奮闘 = Fighting Alone)

And there are many loose interpretations through the chapter, but those are the ones standing out completely missing the mark.

 

[Mieglen]

Introducing the 'All-in-One slime bed'.
It can clean your body,
It can give you a full body massage,
It can give you a good night sleep,
It can jerk you off,
And it can sodomize you.

Reminds me of descriptions of mat play you see from soaplands

 

[Mieglen]

You could be out there researching how to create them in reality...

Just remember not to “accidentally“ create a dog little girl hybrid that traumatises anyone who saw that scene

 

[polemarch]

Okay that was bugging me too. It's explained in the LN (volume 3):

Spoiler: LN dialog

"The food and stuff could go bad if I plop them out..." "Yeah, let's pass on that."

It was mentioned in the manga as well: chapter 41 page 15 when he empties his inventory.

 

[KittyBlue9]

@KittyBlue9

Page 6 I can't go on like this anymore. => I can't be a groom anymore.
Totally missed Kosuke's version of the "I can't be a bride anymore" joke there.

Page 24
We are not contractually allowed to step outside the castle grounds. (stays the same)
Ever since the Holy Kingdom took over, the demi-humans are unable to get close to this "girl" => Ever since the Holy Kingdom took over, the demi-humans can't come near the castle thou.
Little Gunfun => Fighting Alone... (Kogunfuntou = 孤軍奮闘 = Fighting Alone)

And there are many loose interpretations through the chapter, but those are the ones standing out completely missing the mark.

Revised. Kindly refresh page for changes to take effect. Thanks for pointing it out.

 

[Mieglen]

I’m starting to suspect that Qubi is not loyal to the princess, but the royal family frozen in the castle, and because of a reason, needs our MC to be there to save them or something, but I could very well be wrong

Had the thought while re-reading this manga

 

[Deatech]

And then after the mc fall asleep his ass got wreck once again

 

[Morose]

I’m starting to suspect that Qubi is not loyal to the princess, but the royal family frozen in the castle, and because of a reason, needs our MC to be there to save them or something, but I could very well be wrong

Had the thought while re-reading this manga

Novel Spoilers, close enough
Qubi is sort-off like a double agent/spy who work for another Kingdom, who infiltrated and worked with the Holy Kingdom & Sylphy's army because of a mission based on a Prophecy which required him to get the person that appears in the dangerous forrest to the former castle city

 

[Arubatorion_]

Yo you're doing great. I never really understood those people that go 'I know japanese, this is awful' and not provide constructive criticism of where it's wrong, like why even read TLs just to ego check?

 

[baconcat]

Revised. Kindly refresh page to see changes. Thanks for pointing them out.

Edit: It's not my first time to have typos/grammar errors when translating. When someone points them out in the comments, I revise them to further improve the translation quality. I really appreciate folks like you for doing that. Thanks.

Don't get used to it, though, at least not to me continuing to proof whole chapters.

Proofing via quotes in forum posts is stupidly unreliable. Case in point, even after waiting for a while, I still spot several issues I pointed out originally. So, either you didn't find the issues, or didn't agree with the correction, or made a mistake uploading a correction for them, or whatever else … it's all the same to me.

It took me at least twice the time faffing with formatting and wording than it took me to read it in the first place. That's not an efficient or productive use of my time. (When I proof, I use nothing less than a print-out, a red pen, and payment conditions agreed upon in advance.) I prefer preventing issues, not mending them once made.

I really can't be arsed to spend that amount of effort to fix what wouldn't have needed fixing if you hadn't let yourself be goaded into this artificial rush to beat GD. This time I made an exception solely to make a point of what happens when you let yourself be made the bull that attacks the red cloth.

You've already demonstrated you're easily capable of preventing issues like the ones I listed. Meaning, you can easily do it again with the right, untainted attitude. Take your time. Leave it for a day or week or whatever. Do something else and come back later with fresh mind and eye. Any perceived rush to get an SL done is just that, perceived. Illusory, even. Don't let something you like to do for recreation become a chore.

Keep that in mind and you won't need comments full of corrections in the first place.