Honestly great. Both the chapter and the translation.
A thought I had while reading the afterwords is that you did the translation more professionally in terms of adaptation for the public, whereas the other group did not exactly do that, some of the parts you included felt a bit uncomfortable to read and I'd even go as far as saying that Ursula didn't really give off that non-expressive vibe that I think is supposed to be her character.
In yours however, that vibe is perfectly executed and I really loved everything else too, the expressiveness and realistic ways of speaking of the characters, they're so likeable thanks to the adaptation you did.
Overall, really enjoyable chapter and translation, thank you very much for you work!
@StopwatchTL