/i havent read the novel yet, just in case, maybe it's shit too/
IT STARTS GOOD, with the progressive introduction of the challenges of not only higher stake battles, but also with the tasks of handling the castles and their territories. it then progresses as politics begin to come in clutch... but then...
Basically the story goes into overdrive halfway through volume 5. (yeah it got axed, surprised?)
The big battle that could have been avoided if the mage that's also the heroine's dad wasnt a complete overly cautious fucktard...
Gets a splendid deus ex machina.
(that battle happens as a siege on a completely retarded castle design with three "gated" entrances, perched on a gigantic cliff that somehow gets no fucking defensive advantage whatsoever, no sea access and nobody ever thinks of blowing at least the front or the side accesses or have the decency of adding drawbriges, but instead has 6 "gates" that get blasted off by magical crossbow bolts, whose destructive power is on par with a main battle tank at zero cost to the shooter because crests can be used as explosive runes that are that fucking cheated)
ahem. that cheap ass deus ex machina turns to be...
The man whom Siluca was promised to, Mr womanizer, whom siluca saved and now actively runs from, waltzes in with heavy cavalry and almost claps the assault leader Marrine, whom siluca also saved but couldnt fucking get help from because it would "weaken" her position.
But doesnt because he's nice (and they were supposed to marry, as cousins. nice.) and said OP crossbows arent even deployed to counter, too.
this shit just pissed me off. first we get the super tearjerked, stretched to oblivion tragic death of the sister (who gets litterally CUT from there on out, appearing once or twice)
That gets cancelled by the priest that none of the characters like or want, that just fucking came in because "god is good".
WHY! fucking WHY! if she's done a massive sacrifice to save one day, either leave it as is, or admit that her suicide run left her diminished... idk, loosing the tatooed arm for instance.
of course they also thank the priest by telling her to fuck off. of course.
because they're "scientists" opposing their knowledge to the belief that their power could be "godlike" despite never fucking explaining what "chaos" is. you know, the fuel for the crests and the magic of this world. no, that doesnt matter. the story revolves about siluca being a god tier worm who can chow several weeks (or months) worth of books in 8 days but there's no room to expand the lore or a scientific undestanding of the magic.
priest who's also there in the latter volumes, with the sister, appearing as a token...
You cant even begin to describe how crappy the last two volumes get. Pacing takes a hike to fit the final fight that ends up so telegraphied it's boring to tears.
Yeah let's introduce a motherly character (that fragment was great and gave me some false hopes goddamnit) that's also written like vin diesel, as a sacrifice to awake a corrupted hero turned big bad evil demon.
then the whole things goes off like a crate of wet tnt.
badabing, badaboom, open ending with nothing ever happening about the couple's goal to save that island from the beginning. not that the original pacing would've allowed that to happen before book 30...
we get gratuitous sex scenes between some dude and the witch that's the big bad #1 of the last volume for the effort of going through the slog.
if you had the courage to go through my rant, here's a cookie. sorry, needed to vent.