GraPara! - Ch. 133 - A Sultry Night (Censored)

[diphuc1]

Airi is definitely assasinating fumi's character next, it couldnt be more obvious than this. How can someone continue to be this shit of a writer, like use your fucking brain for fucks sake

It's already begun a little bit, her bringing up Sakura at the tail end of their discussion to bring it to that awkward end, showing that' she still feeling a bit haunted by Sakura's shadow.

That would set him back in his career and make him her simp fumi is already insecure about Sakura and comparing herself to her. Notice shionbu missed sakura and Sakura missed when he was her manger it is possible we are misreading Sakura since those may indeed be the happiest she has been in life.

It was already confirmed back in 133 even that Sakura had the most fun back during her times with Shinobu and I don't think we need to separate it into "Shinobu" vs "Shinobu's support" or debate the overwrite sex because they both loved each other and said it clearly, something we've not seen them express the same towards fucboi and Fumi respectively, and we probably never will atp.

 

[DoomResetR]

That would set him back in his career and make him her simp fumi is already insecure about Sakura and comparing herself to her. Notice shionbu missed sakura and Sakura missed when he was her manger it is possible we are misreading Sakura since those may indeed be the happiest she has been in life.

shinobu didn't miss sakura lol, he's 100% thinking about Fumi.
Doing favor for a friend is not simping.
"you won't work with me if you SA my actresses" and like that.

 

[diphuc1]

shinobu didn't miss sakura lol, he's 100% thinking about Fumi.
Doing favor for a friend is not simping.
"you won't work with me if you SA my actresses" and like that.

Can't say much more til they're facing each other in the final two chapters. If Fumi decides to ditch him because her mental can't handle being in "Sakura's shadow" then Shinobu is back on the market.

 

[Xain]

I am so glad that I have bigger issues fucking me in the aah rn so i dont have to worry about this abysmal piece of crap writing

 

[SS-2010]

Not to undermine the message or anything, but why is she living with him though? They clearly have a relationship, and I find it very hard for anyone to agree to work and live with their abusers after the abuse has happened.

They may be in a relationship but they absolutely didn't stay together. That's why Mio drove Sakura home and that's why Sakura didn't change her dress to be what to wear at home while talking to fucboy. She didn't sit but stand and didn't feel like she is at home. It's like she visited him to ask for his opinion then go home.

And it's the normal NTR plot that the victim will become the rapist's girlfriend or sex toy. NTR doujin plot has no reason for us to be considered. It is nonsense by itself. LOL

To be noticed, the vibe of chapter 133 and the vibe of chapter 134 are opposite. Chapter 133 told us the story will go for about 10 chapters but chapter 134 suddenly said Grapara will end in 2 chapters !

The events in chapters 133 and 134 did not align, despite attempts to link them. Even Mio’s behavior seemed odd. Did she shift from someone who had just learned about Sakura's story from having no meeting with Sakura for a long time to be someone who meet Sakura and fucboy regularly and close enough to say "what did he say to make you unhappy?" without mentioning the name of fucboy !? LOL

Was she putting on an act for Nagi in chapter 133, pretending she hadn't seen Sakura in a long time as well? Yet in chapter 134, she acted as if she saw Sakura and that fuckboy frequently to the point of being close with them. Why did she need to put on that charade for Nagi in chapter 133? What was the reason? LOL

Please give credits to @diphuc1 who is the person to pinpoint Mio's opposite behaviors.

That's why we suspect the author of chapter 133 and 134 is not the same person. And we call the person ghost writer. LOL

 

[jonasadan]

They may be in a relationship but they absolutely didn't stay together. That's why Mio drove Sakura home and that's why Sakura didn't change her dress to be what to wear at home while talking to fucboy. She didn't sit but stand and felt like she is at home. It's like she visited him to ask for his opinion then go home.

And it's the normal NTR plot that the victim will become the rapist's girlfriend or sex toy. NTR doujin plot has no reason for us to be considered. It is nonsense by itself. LOL

To be noticed, the vibe of chapter 133 and the vibe of chapter 134 are opposite. Chapter 133 told us the story will go for about 10 chapters but chapter 134 suddenly said Grapara will end in 2 chapters !

The events in chapters 133 and 134 did not align, despite attempts to link them. Even Mio’s behavior seemed odd. Did she shift from someone who had just learned about Sakura's story from having no meeting with Sakura for a long time to be someone who meet Sakura and fucboy regularly and close enough to say "what did he say to make you unhappy?" without mentioning the name of fucboy !? LOL

Was she putting on an act for Nagi in chapter 133, pretending she hadn't seen Sakura in a long time as well? Yet in chapter 134, she acted as if she saw Sakura and that fuckboy frequently to the point of being close with them. Why did she need to put on that charade for Nagi in chapter 134? What was the reason? LOL

Please give credits to @diphuc1 who is the person who pinpoint Mio's opposite behaviors.

That's why we suspect the author of chapter 133 and 134 is not the same person. And we call the person ghost writer. LOL

What I don't understand is why they decided to replace the original author for 133 but then decided she'd be back for 134? I don't know, I just don't see the point of the ghostwriter thing

 

[diphuc1]

Even Mio’s behavior seemed odd. Did she shift from someone who had just learned about Sakura's story from having no meeting with Sakura for a long time to be someone who meet Sakura and fucboy regularly and close enought to say "what did he say to make you unhappy?" without mentioning the name of fucboy. LOL

Going to be curious for the official TL drop to shed better light on this because it could just be a case of bad TL. Agree on the weird vibe shift from 133>134, least it's ending sooner than later so we don't keep getting baited. Would've loved to see it go on for much longer with the nice art but sadly story progression had other ideas.

 

[diphuc1]

What I don't understand is why they decided to replace the original author for 133 but then decided she'd be back for 134? I don't know, I just don't see the point of the ghostwriter thing

We're just speculating as usual here but some of the writing inconsistency and difference in writing quality (Mio and Sakura actually have a solid heart to heart vs the tea meetup) is worth pointing out, it could still be KA writing but just under a tigher crunch now that they have to wrap it up 2 more chapters.

 

[Cross-21-]

What I don't understand is why they decided to replace the original author for 133 but then decided she'd be back for 134? I don't know, I just don't see the point of the ghostwriter thing

I think he meant up until 133 KA was the author, and from 134, the newest one, the ghost writer took over to do better damage control.

 

[whorainzone]

Like if there is new ghost writer he could easily handle it. Just retcon 129. It never happened. Just dont show what happened after slutkura went with fuckboi and this topic is done. He could even continue the story by himself... i dont believe there is a ghost writer behind it, this manga still sales and would have the potential to sale even more why throwing it away? makes no sense to me

 

[hugorito420]

I think he meant up until 133 KA was the author, and from 134, the newest one, the ghost writer took over to do better damage control.

The Fumi and Shinobu sex moment was surely for damage control.

 

[DoomResetR]

Reminder that with this getting canceled Katsura Airi is now free to make porn out of it btw. Basically her contract is done and she owns the IP, there will be some differences with a porn version cus the artist is different but she knows how to drawn porn. her last porn manga ran for 19 chapters.
I'm sure she's going to do it and expand Yuma's motivation and if she doesn't NTR'd Fumi in the official title, 100% she will do that with the porn version.

 

[diphuc1]

I think he meant up until 133 KA was the author, and from 134, the newest one, the ghost writer took over to do better damage control.

Overall the damage control was okayish? I mean they confirmed that fucboi and Sakura were an item this whole time but then they now have a fallout that could lead to an eventual breakup (via text pls) immediately after is...a choice. Fumi's character takes a bit of a hit when she brings up Sakura unprompted, guess they wanted to match fucboixSakura vibes heading into the final stretch. I enjoyed the Mio Sakura part of this chapter the most funnily enough, and will be curious if any surprises comes out of it other than the obvious that everyone's thinking.

 

[whorainzone]

Reminder that with this getting canceled Katsura Airi is now free to make porn out of it btw. Basically her contract is done and she owns the IP, there will be some differences with a porn version cus the artist is different but she knows how to drawn porn. her last porn manga ran for 19 chapters.

Its not her ip someone already explained how it works.

 

[jonasadan]

I think he meant up until 133 KA was the author, and from 134, the newest one, the ghost writer took over to do better damage control.

Oh, I see. But I don't know, I'd say that 133 does seem different from KA to me, and 134 seems more like KA

 

[Cross-21-]

Like if there is new ghost writer he could easily handle it. Just retcon 129. It never happened. Just dont show what happened after slutkura went with fuckboi and this topic is done. He could even continue the story by himself... i dont believe there is a ghost writer behind it, this manga still sales and would have the potential to sale even more why throwing it away? makes no sense to me

Canceled subs, low preorders on upcoming vol, and the massive backlash giving negative exposure... All good reasons to just jump ship. Not everyone would take a risk like Takeda Super did... Maybe even their stupid pride didn't allow them to retcon these chapters, who knows.

 

[diphuc1]

Reminder that with this getting canceled Katsura Airi is now free to make porn out of it btw. Basically her contract is done and she owns the IP, there will be some differences with a porn version cus the artist is different but she knows how to drawn porn. her last porn manga ran for 19 chapters.
I'm sure she's going to do it and expand Yuma's motivation and if she doesn't NTR'd Fumi in the official title, 100% she will do that with the porn version.

I'm told by @SS-2010 that the rights should be 50/50 between KA and Artist so it's not like KA suddenly has free reign to do as they please now and get the last laugh.

 

[hugorito420]

Reminder that with this getting canceled Katsura Airi is now free to make porn out of it btw. Basically her contract is done and she owns the IP, there will be some differences with a porn version cus the artist is different but she knows how to drawn porn. her last porn manga ran for 19 chapters.
I'm sure she's going to do it and expand Yuma's motivation and if she doesn't NTR'd Fumi in the official title, 100% she will do that with the porn version.

Most probably thing to happen here.

 

[hugorito420]

Canceled subs, low preorders on upcoming vol, and the massive backlash giving negative exposure... All good reasons to just jump ship. Not everyone would take a risk like Takeda Super did... Maybe even their stupid pride didn't allow them to retcon these chapters, who knows.

What do you think is going to be the ending? Because i can see some damage control still happening here.

 

[box2024]

Reminder that with this getting canceled Katsura Airi is now free to make porn out of it btw. Basically her contract is done and she owns the IP, there will be some differences with a porn version cus the artist is different but she knows how to drawn porn. her last porn manga ran for 19 chapters.
I'm sure she's going to do it and expand Yuma's motivation and if she doesn't NTR'd Fumi in the official title, 100% she will do that with the porn version.

That's fine I don't have to read it ever.