This was way too fast paced and confusing. Even reading the whole thing in one sitting I was confused who people were, and what was going on sometimes. Overall the reincorporation was actually decent, and it was all tied up in a decent little bow.
That said, I wanted to turn the "someone is about to die, but someone jumps in and saves them or takes their place" cliche into a drinking game but I would have died of alcohol poisoning.