What's esl?the big cliffhanger of the chapter and you not only esl it, but then have the balls to hawk your donation links?
English as a Second Language. The commenter was ridiculing the TL's bad grammar on the last page.What's esl?
the build in tension is pretty well done though imoGood job author, taking what could have been 3 pages and stretching them for a whole chapter.
And he did a good job at that too. This chapter was still entertaining.Good job author, taking what could have been 3 pages and stretching them for a whole chapter.