This chapter is really well written. Despite being axed, it wraps up quite well with the story and there's even some part which broke the 4th wall: the dialogue between Maki and the editor and the dialogue about people who buys the book.
If the author really planned to set up this comedy into an action/adventure/romance then it's truly a shame it got axed especially when there's a lot of trash isekai.
Other than that I wasn't expecting much from this manga but seeing what the author could pull off in this chapter I'm waiting for his next work.