Hajimete no Gal - Ch. 160 - My first Playground

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Greetings, fellow Hajimete no Gal enthusiasts! Do you have thoughts, feedback, or suggestions you'd like the original author to hear? Here's your opportunity!

As the translator for this much-loved manga, I'm offering a unique opportunity until June 27th for you to share your insights about its current course. Be it praise, constructive criticism, or your overall feelings about the current situation of the manga, I'm here to gather and deliver it.

I will compile your comments into a comprehensive and short summary, embodying the perspectives of our fan community. This unified voice will then be communicated directly to the author through his Patreon channel. This isn't just any feedback - this is a direct line from dedicated fans to the author himself!

Do you feel that the manga has been overly focused on fan service lately? Are you worried that the story between Junichi and Yukana is losing its depth? Are you tired of the constant focus on the sweets store? Feel free to express your thoughts (but please, do so respectfully).

Simply leave a comment on this thread or send me a private message.

*We've reached 10 translated chapters!
*Yay! I believe this chapter has been my best translation so far. Starting from this one, I began to use mixed fonts to give more expression and personality to the characters! I hope you enjoy it.
*As Volume 16 has come to an end, the raws are now being acquired from the monthly magazine in which Hajimete no Gal is published, hence there is more "advertising" on the opening and closing pages of the chapters.
Next one coming in July 2
As Iris-chan usually says: Au revoir!

Don't be shy! Come say hi on Discord! Discord link

And if you're enjoying the work and want to support it, you can buy me a coffee here: BuyMeACoffee I really appreciate it!"
 
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The only things thats gotten more erotic is Yame’s developed adult body and the slutty black thong she’s wearing. Hmm, ahhhh
 
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Honest feedback: this manga has gone off the rails. It was always a silly fanservice series with some cute moments but lately (like 60 chapters lol) it feels like there's no end in sight. It's always, and then there was another problem, and then there's another girl, and then there's some misunderstsnding that drags on for 10 chapters, and then there's this weird ninja rape fetish thing. The series lacks focus on the thing that drove it's intial appeal.
 
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This manga should have stopped when they finished high school. The end was a shit show, and they are bringing it back... This whole ninja bullshit arc belonged in a doujinshi, not as part of the main story, the author choosing to bring it back shows they just don't care anymore.
 
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Greetings, fellow Hajimete no Gal enthusiasts! Do you have thoughts, feedback, or suggestions you'd like the original author to hear? Here's your opportunity!

As the translator for this much-loved manga, I'm offering a unique opportunity until June 27th for you to share your insights about its current course. Be it praise, constructive criticism, or your overall feelings about the current situation of the manga, I'm here to gather and deliver it.

I will compile your comments into a comprehensive and short summary, embodying the perspectives of our fan community. This unified voice will then be communicated directly to the author through his Patreon channel. This isn't just any feedback - this is a direct line from dedicated fans to the author himself!

Do you feel that the manga has been overly focused on fan service lately? Are you worried that the story between Junichi and Yukana is losing its depth? Are you tired of the constant focus on the sweets store? Feel free to express your thoughts (but please, do so respectfully).

Simply leave a comment on this thread or send me a private message.

*We've reached 10 translated chapters!
*Yay! I believe this chapter has been my best translation so far. Starting from this one, I began to use mixed fonts to give more expression and personality to the characters! I hope you enjoy it.
*As Volume 16 has come to an end, the raws are now being acquired from the monthly magazine in which Hajimete no Gal is published, hence there is more "advertising" on the opening and closing pages of the chapters.
Next one coming in July 2
As Iris-chan usually says: Au revoir!

Don't be shy! Come say hi on Discord! Discord link

And if you're enjoying the work and want to support it, you can buy me a coffee here: BuyMeACoffee I really appreciate it!"
I think what I a want to see from the author are genuine moments of love and progression. Maybe start with a discussion on the personal anxieties and concerns of the female lead.
The thing is, we don’t know her parents, or even her background much at all. We just kind of see her as fap material with a cute face and big boobs. I want to see her as a person who has feelings, passion, dreams and despair. It doesn’t have to be exaggerated drama, but I think we can’t just have a pretty face with big tits. As for the story, I don’t think sex is the only way for progression; that said, it’s certainly not funny to be teasing readers for well over 100 chapters.
If the focus wasn’t on romance and instead it was a school life manga, I commend the author for actually allowing the characters to reach graduation (instead of staying as children for 200+ chapters).
However, this is a romance manga and our characters genuinely need to hold a proactive love for each other. We need Junichi to plan dates and think of ways to grow as a man, we need Yame to think about her future and snuggle up to her man more.
 
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Another ninja arc... My God... I kinda wish you'd stop translating this, so I'd have a reason to finally drop this.
Recently I've notice, that most of mangas that I'm following either end, rush to an end or stale in a awkward state. While new mangas that apear are either those 1-pagers that are like plague or another boring, random high-schooler romcom/isekai shit, that you could swear you saw somewhere else.
 
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As the translator for this much-loved manga,
AHA-HA-HA-HA-HA!
I grateful for translation, but we all here to just see the end. It was kinda good manga, even with some strange arcs like that ninja arc or there they eating hallucination mushrooms, but after "study abroad" arc it was killed for us all.
There's no salvation for this shit now.
 
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I'm in agreement with everyone else. I wish there was more progress with Yame. I thought the manga club girl was interesting in college, but not really with this sweet's girl.
 
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HIMIKO ZAIZENJI

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AN OMI ALLIANCE SUBSIDIARY
 
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Why are they doing this again, this manga just seems desperate for horny fans at the expense of being fun to read. I've read H-Manga with plots 10 times better than this.
 
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Being honest, I just don't really care anymore. I'm here to see at what point it gets axed, because, judging from the author's twitter (as I've checked it today), there seems to be another manga for the different publisher he is more invested in.
 
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I’d like for there to be more focus on yukana and junichi. I enjoy a harem as much as the next guy but it’s obvious the main draw of this series is the main ship.
 
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At this point, I just want Junichi to get actually angry when he tries to spend since time with Yukana and then some random girl pops in with a problem and she just decides to go along with it while dragging him with her.
 
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I feel like the mood and general happenings of the story really took a very unwarranted turn after chapter 100.
 
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Honest feedback: this manga has gone off the rails. It was always a silly fanservice series with some cute moments but lately (like 60 chapters lol) it feels like there's no end in sight. It's always, and then there was another problem, and then there's another girl, and then there's some misunderstsnding that drags on for 10 chapters, and then there's this weird ninja rape fetish thing. The series lacks focus on the thing that drove it's intial appeal.
yeah honestly the series is just ecchi than romance, heck id rather read an actual romance hentai than this
 

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