Hajirau Kimi ga Mitainda - Ch. 54.1 - The Gods' Summit

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I don't know what you need it for since it's already uploaded, and I don't know if nsfw is allowed in comments, but there you go, left is raw, right is my edit
Best redraw that I've seen
 
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I just... I need to know... how do we know that little freckle was there all alone?
If they got inspiration from somewhere, where is the source to corroborate it was placed correctly?
 
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so we got a spread and it was cropped? like r u fucking kidding me? lmao
author's published a full-blown hentai doujin in january with not only nudity but also sex and now we get this lol
just hope we get the full version in the volume at least (would make the most sense from a marketing standpoint).
still stinks since this is supposed to be seinen and fucking around like that is quite uncommon. they usually play it straight. either ecchi/nudity or not. not half-baked self-censorship.
 
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I don't know what you need it for since it's already uploaded, and I don't know if nsfw is allowed in comments, but there you go, left is raw, right is my edit
Oh so you expanded the image? I thought it was just the nipples that got added in the second one. Impressive.
 
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what happened here? ok... please, attention! the author did nothing bad here, it's just "naturally censored". the RAW, guys, was normal until before touching the nipples. So I had to increase the canvas size (think of it like having now more white space in a canvas!) to actually draw the rest myself (yes I draw everything myself)
and the beauty mark is just something I WANTED to add...
hahaha I buy the official raw, but when free raw it's available you can check it for yourselves
 
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Look I know, booba and all that... but what the hell is happening!? How did we get here from last chapter?
 
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what happened here? ok... please, attention! the author did nothing bad here, it's just "naturally censored". the RAW, guys, was normal until before touching the nipples. So I had to increase the canvas size (think of it like having now more white space in a canvas!) to actually draw the rest myself (yes I draw everything myself)
and the beauty mark is just something I WANTED to add...
hahaha I buy the official raw, but when free raw it's available you can check it for yourselves
Incredible edit, one of the best I have seen, congratulations!

I have a couple of questions both about the edit, and for this and last chapter

For the edit, how did you decide to make it, did you use a reference for nipples drawn by the author on other series?

Also I was thinking that her nipples were going to be harder seeing how they were bulging when she had her towel on, since she is kind of an exhibitionist, maybe this situation was arousing her, making it look as if she had either big or long erect nipples under her towel

So as a redrawer when you have to draw the reveal by yourself, would you say that the bulge on her towel comes from her areolas being puffy and wide rather than her nipples themselves being erect?

Or that regardless of bulges, this version is more aesthetically pleasing compared to just giving her big nipples, and that what matters most is to make them look as best as possible, keeping a balance between big breast, big areolas, and small nipples? So that the end result looks sexy but cute rather than sexy and extravagant (since she is still a teenager)?

Also why do you think that after coming this far the double spread reveal end censored by being cropped off?

Finally regarding the transition from last chapter to this one, how did they went from "I am gonna expose my dick to distract those guys so they wont notice that you are on the men's bath" to "hey can you show me your boobs now before we start filming tomorrow?"

Last chapter makes it look like it is him the one that will expose his dick, but instead it was her showing her boobs, was that a problem with the chapter itself or the translation?


Again, wonderful edit, you can't even notice that it is an edit, it really looks like the official art 🎉
 
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Boobs aside, this chapter doesn't make sense lmao, it doesn't flow at all from the last chapter. Is this really ch 54?
yea i was thinking the same thing, i thought it the whole chapter was fan-made lol it's so short and out of place
 
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how does touching boobs got anything to do with recording?

do they afraid to get catch and chase out so they can't filming?

just do it in the room then!!
 

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