Hajirau Kimi ga Mitainda - Ch. 54.1 - The Gods' Summit

[ahudson]

Awoooga.

Why is this happening?

 

[Iskarioth]

So it's unofficial goodness? But I gotta say, that boner killer face just made me laugh so hard.

 

[Darklight99]

Thanks for the redraw, my dick is a diamond now.

 

[Farsi]

No

 

[Reamer]

Real yeah real

 

[user000000001]

GOD FUCKING DAAAAAMN GOD SUMMIT INDEED

 

[Jordygo]

Is the dialog also edited? It doesn't really make sense with what happened last chapter

 

[b-no]

I really wish author-san would show it's full glory in tankobon. Pretty please Umagome Rakure.

 

[Aster_von_Einzbern]

I was wondering why everyone was having trouble to understand this chapter, so I had to check the last chapter translated by Animewaves.
The thing is they COMPLETELY created another meaning. All started here

Spoiler: raw

Spoiler: translation

what animewaves translated was a meaning that Shirasawa was going to EXPOSE himself to them, but that's completely wrong, he implicitly is telling Kaho that if they don't show her naked body, it's impossible to continue the recording.

because they translated 出す in a completely different way here:

Spoiler: raw

Spoiler: translation

the meaning is wrong. he never said he was going to expose himself, he is saying "we have to go out in that case" but Kaho understood that as "you have to show them"

And the next page is where kaho gets more confused because of that.

Spoiler: raw

Spoiler: translation

so, chapter 54 has a lot of sense when you think that in previous chapter Shirasawa was telling her "it doesn't matter, we have to get out or we won't record anything", but kaho wrongly understands "if you don't show your boobs, we won't record anything". I know japanese is a bitch hahaha

chapter 53, needs to be fixed asap, it's going to confuse more people

 

[Aster_von_Einzbern]

Incredible edit, one of the best I have seen, congratulations!

I have a couple of questions both about the edit, and for this and last chapter

For the edit, how did you decide to make it, did you use a reference for nipples drawn by the author on other series?

Also I was thinking that her nipples were going to be harder seeing how they were bulging when she had her towel on, since she is kind of an exhibitionist, maybe this situation was arousing her, making it look as if she had either big or long erect nipples under her towel

So as a redrawer when you have to draw the reveal by yourself, would you say that the bulge on her towel comes from her areolas being puffy and wide rather than her nipples themselves being erect?

Or that regardless of bulges, this version is more aesthetically pleasing compared to just giving her big nipples, and that what matters most is to make them look as best as possible, keeping a balance between big breast, big areolas, and small nipples? So that the end result looks sexy but cute rather than sexy and extravagant (since she is still a teenager)?

Also why do you think that after coming this far the double spread reveal end censored by being cropped off?

Finally regarding the transition from last chapter to this one, how did they went from "I am gonna expose my dick to distract those guys so they wont notice that you are on the men's bath" to "hey can you show me your boobs now before we start filming tomorrow?"

Last chapter makes it look like it is him the one that will expose his dick, but instead it was her showing her boobs, was that a problem with the chapter itself or the translation?


Again, wonderful edit, you can't even notice that it is an edit, it really looks like the official art 🎉

about the edit, I just thought that size of nipples was what everyone would like, so I draw them that size.

about the translation, one reply above.
the translation of chapter 53 is wrong. Needs to be fixed

 

[greedeon]

So... the point is for him to get hard so that when he shows off to the guys they would get weirded out and go away.... right?
Cuz that's the only thing that I could come up with as a reason as to why he would go for Honjous Hongas. But it's weird that it's not explained more right? We go from "ILL EXPOSE MYSELF" to this wordless concession to Honji giving booba. Man Uma sensei you are weird, and I love you

 

[greedeon]

I was wondering why everyone was having trouble to understand this chapter, so I had to check the last chapter translated by Animewaves.
The thing is they COMPLETELY created another meaning. All started here

Spoiler: raw

Spoiler: translation

what animewaves translated was a meaning that Shirasawa was going to EXPOSE himself to them, but that's completely wrong, he implicitly is telling Kaho that if they don't show her naked body, it's impossible to continue the recording.

because they translated 出す in a completely different way here:

Spoiler: raw

Spoiler: translation

the meaning is wrong. he never said he was going to expose himself, he is saying "we have to go out in that case" but Kaho understood that as "you have to show them"

And the next page is where kaho gets more confused because of that.

Spoiler: raw

Spoiler: translation

so, chapter 54 has a lot of sense when you think that in previous chapter Shirasawa was telling her "it doesn't matter, we have to get out or we won't record anything", but kaho wrongly understands "if you don't show your boobs, we won't record anything". I know japanese is a bitch hahaha

chapter 53, needs to be fixed asap, it's going to confuse more people

Well would you look at that XD XD XD

 

[greedeon]

I was wondering why everyone was having trouble to understand this chapter, so I had to check the last chapter translated by Animewaves.
The thing is they COMPLETELY created another meaning. All started here

Spoiler: raw

Spoiler: translation

what animewaves translated was a meaning that Shirasawa was going to EXPOSE himself to them, but that's completely wrong, he implicitly is telling Kaho that if they don't show her naked body, it's impossible to continue the recording.

because they translated 出す in a completely different way here:

Spoiler: raw

Spoiler: translation

the meaning is wrong. he never said he was going to expose himself, he is saying "we have to go out in that case" but Kaho understood that as "you have to show them"

And the next page is where kaho gets more confused because of that.

Spoiler: raw

Spoiler: translation

so, chapter 54 has a lot of sense when you think that in previous chapter Shirasawa was telling her "it doesn't matter, we have to get out or we won't record anything", but kaho wrongly understands "if you don't show your boobs, we won't record anything". I know japanese is a bitch hahaha

chapter 53, needs to be fixed asap, it's going to confuse more people

But why is Shirasawa going along with taking her towel away?

 

[Galder]

what happened here? ok... please, attention! the author did nothing bad here, it's just "naturally censored". the RAW, guys, was normal until before touching the nipples. So I had to increase the canvas size (think of it like having now more white space in a canvas!) to actually draw the rest myself (yes I draw everything myself)
and the beauty mark is just something I WANTED to add...
hahaha I buy the official raw, but when free raw it's available you can check it for yourselves

it's not "natural censorship" since they simply could have made honjou smaller on the spread so that her tits fit in (something they'll hopefully do in the volume). and like i said, understandable from a business standpoint, but pathetic nonetheless. with shonen publications i would understand, but not the webversion of young jump. they CAN release uncensored stuff if they WANT. for example gal sen/gyarusen from the same platform is uncensored.

 

[Aster_von_Einzbern]

But why is Shirasawa going along with taking her towel away?

ah, reading again, it's because he said "there's no way men wouldn't look a cute naked girl"
kaho goes like "even you?"
he says "I would!" With a badass-like double page

 

[Doutorfunga]

how does touching boobs got anything to do with recording?

do they afraid to get catch and chase out so they can't filming?

just do it in the room then!!

This is a manga in which the girl kisses the guy at the end of an encounter and somehow the two don't bring it up again. Logic need not apply here

 

[Sancho_2]

This is a manga in which the girl kisses the guy at the end of an encounter and somehow the two don't bring it up again. Logic need not apply here

That's what I was thinking. And how can he be so embarrased about being almost naked with Kaho, after all they already went through (constant masturbation filming, caressing in the club, fingering on the street, vibrator-walking on the fair...) or, even other stuff he did that obviously made him seen quite comfortable with lewdness (that whole saga with Ekoda, and even the sex video between teachers on the very first chapter).

I'm really turned off by his behaviour, I really don't want another man-princess as the MC of a smut manga. Any normal person would've already hit that.

 

[tomtom78]

Boobs aside, this chapter doesn't make sense lmao, it doesn't flow at all from the last chapter. Is this really ch 54?

Agreed, I'm confused as well, I thought he was on his way to expose himself so that she could leave the bath, and suddenly they're both in agreement about her showing him her tits ? Feels like a missing chapter

 

[Grrmen]

I was wondering why everyone was having trouble to understand this chapter, so I had to check the last chapter translated by Animewaves.
The thing is they COMPLETELY created another meaning. All started here

Spoiler: raw

Spoiler: translation

what animewaves translated was a meaning that Shirasawa was going to EXPOSE himself to them, but that's completely wrong, he implicitly is telling Kaho that if they don't show her naked body, it's impossible to continue the recording.

because they translated 出す in a completely different way here:

Spoiler: raw

Spoiler: translation

the meaning is wrong. he never said he was going to expose himself, he is saying "we have to go out in that case" but Kaho understood that as "you have to show them"

And the next page is where kaho gets more confused because of that.

Spoiler: raw

Spoiler: translation

so, chapter 54 has a lot of sense when you think that in previous chapter Shirasawa was telling her "it doesn't matter, we have to get out or we won't record anything", but kaho wrongly understands "if you don't show your boobs, we won't record anything". I know japanese is a bitch hahaha

chapter 53, needs to be fixed asap, it's going to confuse more people

OMG thank you so much. I felt like the there was something completely off, but it's hard for a person who doesn't know japanese to accuse a mistranslation, especially if the grammer is technically correct. I guess the translator was confused about the subject and it snowballed from there.

 

[Asynchria]

that fucking face...lmao