Hana ni Arashi - Vol. 7 Ch. 75 - Baring Ourselves, Part 2

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Feels good, real good. Thank you Schuyguy and igenetycs!
 
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nice to see it back, cant believe its been already 5 months
but it feels like some autocorrect typos and missing words got through
 
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That was steamy, in more ways than one ! Glad to have this back after a little while .
 
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@igenetycs
page 2 "what took you?"
i think it should be: "what took you so long?"
page 4 "we want to gaze upon them and hope!"
it's just fine on its own, they can "hope" to have such breasts but then nonoha says "but chidori hates it when you grope her" and later "so...don't touch her or stare (...)" so in that context it feels like it should be "grope" not "hope"
there is also that "what took you?" repeated later so maybe translator just wanted to shorten it but it just sounds odd to me said like that
these are ones i remembered now

but, im terrible at writing, gramma and such stuff and english isn't even my first language so i may be wrong
 

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