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@remiska: There is nothing wrong in any of those examples. "What took you" is a recognized and commonly used way of shortening "what took you so long?" See also "what kept you?" Also, the "gaze upon them and hope" is a fairly standard attitude for manga schoolgirls when confronted with someone who has larger breasts. I see no reason to assume any error here, despite the followup lines.