Happy End. - Vol. 3 Ch. 8 - Departed Spirit
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Michael Jackson in the credits was the real jump scare
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Got it fixed, thanks man for letting us know 🤙🏼
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Could you give me an example?
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Page 10: Information.
Page 22: Unfortunately, y'know, and Anyways.
Page 23: Information
Page 25 has Akane saying Izumiu.
Also the gag chapters, have Micheal, instead of Michael. Though I dunno if that's fine.
There might be more, but those are what stood out to me.
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Oh I see, yeah man I'll 100% get to fixing those, thanks for letting me know!
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They got so far, and yet the only reason they did was so that the observer could let Akane gather the information. But why? Why let them think they can win, and then trigger a loss from a violent death? Sayaka was already suspicious, but then her heart broke knowing they were never gonna win. The observer implies if she was the one time leaping, then everything would be different. But she isn't, and now once again, Akane has to die a violent death...
Poor Izumi. Whatever happened to her, she never asked for this. No one did. But now she's in a monstrous state!
Just what does the Observer want from Akane?
I also noticed on page 7 that it says "prince of a certain country". Should there be an "a" or "the" before that. And page 13 has "they're important information", not "there's important information". Page 39 has "after" that needs a proper hyphen,
Poor Izumi. Whatever happened to her, she never asked for this. No one did. But now she's in a monstrous state!
Just what does the Observer want from Akane?
Thanks, I hope it doesn't take too long.
I also noticed on page 7 that it says "prince of a certain country". Should there be an "a" or "the" before that. And page 13 has "they're important information", not "there's important information". Page 39 has "after" that needs a proper hyphen,
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Man, this is so bleak given that seemingly every inch of progress regarding information gathering on their side only happens because the antagonist allows it. I feel that some of the mystery has shifted to the goals of this mysterious third party and why they are allowing the two girls to collect this information, when they seem to have the power to just immediately kill them and be done with it. Is it because it's entertaining to them or something?
So now we get zombie-like enemies, and given how Akane identified the first as "Izumi" before being murdered later by someone who looks way more like Izumi, I'd hazard a guess that these things are maybe... clone zombies...? Really?
So now we get zombie-like enemies, and given how Akane identified the first as "Izumi" before being murdered later by someone who looks way more like Izumi, I'd hazard a guess that these things are maybe... clone zombies...? Really?
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I'm sorry, but this writing is kind of crap. But I the most unnecessary and inconsequential way.
"This does feel different from before." thought Sayaka who LITERALLY never remembers anything and therefore cannot possibly have any feelings, yet is somehow magically written to have this feeling. I mentioned this in the previous chapter. It's awkward writing.
And I'm being clear. I already said it is unnecessary and inconsequential that this is bad writing. The author could've EASILY omitted it, and it would've been fine. Imagine going to a restaurant and the chef puts on a good show of making the food, with the fire and theatrics. And it looks good, and it smells good. But then, right at the end, the chef just puts on this scoop of plain butter right on top of everything and just looks so proud of themself. Like, completely unnecessary. You can just scoot it off to the side for the most part, and the food is probably still fine. But it leaves a bad taste in your mouth, and it's like why, why even did you do this stupid thing?
That's this. That's what happened here.
"This does feel different from before." thought Sayaka who LITERALLY never remembers anything and therefore cannot possibly have any feelings, yet is somehow magically written to have this feeling. I mentioned this in the previous chapter. It's awkward writing.
And I'm being clear. I already said it is unnecessary and inconsequential that this is bad writing. The author could've EASILY omitted it, and it would've been fine. Imagine going to a restaurant and the chef puts on a good show of making the food, with the fire and theatrics. And it looks good, and it smells good. But then, right at the end, the chef just puts on this scoop of plain butter right on top of everything and just looks so proud of themself. Like, completely unnecessary. You can just scoot it off to the side for the most part, and the food is probably still fine. But it leaves a bad taste in your mouth, and it's like why, why even did you do this stupid thing?
That's this. That's what happened here.
