Hariko no Otome - Vol. 2 Ch. 6.2

[MangaDex]

 

[Sheeplet]

Thank you for translating this chapter!

 

[GiraffeNeck]

Pretty good but might I suggest using a different font, the current one is a little too small and thin making it look off.

 

[Xerber85]

Great work. Thanks so much for picking this up!

 

[Fredthefishlord]

They look a lot more like father and daughter than husband and wife

 

[Smilyfacething]

Thanks so much for your hard work!!🥰🥰

 

[ifarisu]

Thabk you for picking up this series. I hope you will contunie it or the scanlation team will be back without a drama

 

[cathelia]

Omg thank you so so so much for translating this!! Your TL is really good!!

 

[Yamibi]

Hey good work on first try. I could follow story translated by you. You use sacred beast and holy beast both referring to same name. You should decide on one and keep it. Also there are some small mistakes when you repeat words or use wrong grammar, but nothing that would make this unreadable. You should ask someone to proofread or use the free app "gramarly". Run all your prepared translations through it and fix obvious mistakes that app will highlight. I have little knowledge about japanese language so I can't say if it was translated properly but I could follow conversations and it made sense. Good luck.

 

[joel7686]

For the senseless people that were talking about age gap, and all other things related to the marriage

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I hope now everything was cleared, it is just for protection and status.
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[Wolvenworks]

considering this is a newbie's work, not bad dude. everything looks neat, you did not make the rookie mistake of using thick blocky fonts that eat up space and look hideous, you did not use weird fonts that are hard to read, the texts are centered properly, and most importantly they make sense. 9/10 from me. my only issue is your font choice since it's rather thin. usually for manga most ppl use Wild Words as their font btw. have actually seen a couple fonts that are good for manga but i don't know what they're called.

if you're not sure what you translated is right, get a proofreader (like me, but please don't get me. i want to enjoy my holiday lol. V aint gonna level herself up).

 

[Alaskam00se]

I would recommend using the Wildwords font

 

[SomeOtakuGuy]

Hey thanks for the chapter! I was wondering if this would get another update, your translation if really good

 

[IncreaseSoup]

Thank you for the chapter! If you're looking for fonts I'd suggest Wild Words since I see that one used a lot, think you can find it off most free font sites. Just from doing some googling to make sure I got the name right I also found this site which has some more fonts typically used with it, looks like some other guides too.
https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/type/fonts.html

 

[Blacksoul]

i only notice one misspelling but other than thanks for the update

 

[silasthebloodthirsty]

Yay! I'm so glad this is being translated again. I want to know what happens next!

 

[Kireato]

Nice, I enjoy this story a lot.

 

[Fitz]

Thanks for the update! Looking forward to more.

 

[asdkant]

Thanks for picking this up 😃

If time and will allow, please apply the corrections everyone pointed out to a version 2 of this chapter so future readers have an even better experience

 

[kawaii123456]

Nice to see this picked up