Huh? Did you just casually write "I removed something from the original art because it looked weird to me" and think you can get away with it?
Being bad at TLing and not translating certain words and writing them as is (Ponkotsu means trash, useless, and can also be used as clumsy. Not that hard to look it up) is one thing. BUT, removing something from the original art because it "looks" weird to you? That's just fucking stupid.
I might as well go read the raws at this point. A translator, somewhat proficiency in English and a working brain do a better job at TLing than this scan.
What part about this looks weird to you? Do muscular women scare you or something?
What a ponkotsu TL.