Hazure Waku no [Joutai Ijou Skill] de Saikyou ni Natta Ore ga Subete o Juurin Suru made - Ch. 54.1 - Existence Outside the Frame

[groudonvert]

It would help if you actually read my comments(or the whole conversation), instead of agreeing with me by accident in your first sentence.

I mean, I added a different example to what you already said. An example who follows what the readers want and make the story worse to follow.

 

[Khazar123]

I mean, I added a different example to what you already said. An example who follows what the readers want and make the story worse to follow.

Which is fine, I just have a pet peeve with false narratives, since things like that can easily spiral out of control.

And while I agree that spider is an example of how these wishes can go bad, the writing and pacing is just so hit and miss after she got out. While she was in the dungeon you never really had the feeling that you only read a cutout of a story. After she gets out, you could really feel the disconnect.

Maybe the manga needed some creative freedom, to make it work better and fix the writing/pacing. But that can also fail badly.
¯\(ツ)/¯

 

[groudonvert]

Which is fine, I just have a pet peeve with false narratives, since things like that can easily spiral out of control.

And while I agree that spider is an example of how these wishes can go bad, the writing and pacing is just so hit and miss after she got out. While she was in the dungeon you never really had the feeling that you only read a cutout of a story. After she gets out, you could really feel the disconnect.

Maybe the manga needed some creative freedom, to make it work better and fix the writing/pacing. But that can also fail badly.
¯\(ツ)/¯

Indeed when she was in the dungeon it didn't look like you missed half of the story.
But it didn't help the anime when all manga only considered the human part as filler.
The manga really hurt the Light Novel more than it helped it.

 

[lordb1]

This fight is dragging on too long and it's getting boring.

 

[nobody2002]

I guess we have to wait another chapter. 🙄