Her Mountain, Her Ocean - Vol. 3 Ch. 67 - She's Still Alive

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I know it is fucked up but I can't help but laugh when the mood changes this quickly lol. This manhua goes fluffy,weird stalker friend, fluffy , literal murder scene
 
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60 chapters of fluffy slice of life and then this? Wtf am I reading
 
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Just saying: Telling someone "It's okay, she's still alive." out of nowhere might not be the single worst way to dispel worry… but it's at least in the top ten.

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Readers: Complain about Quinoa conspiring with some guys to r*** them being too dark for a sweet fluffy story.
Author: "Oh, you want dark?" starts writing this arc
 
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Life can be gone into 180° real quick
This manhwa portray it real good
U can't always expect ur life will always gone smoothly with no problem at all, something unexpected can always happen

Well... this is life
It's not about "well, life is not all sunshine and rainbows"
This author just has some really bad problems with pacing, and the last few arcs they tried to go in a "darker" direction, but it just doesn't work well in the context of this manhua

You really shouldn't make a slice of life manhua, and then out of nowhere put attempted rape and murder 60 chapters in :nyoron:
 
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The pacing is just plain bad. Like Arcane S2 bad. Barely any build up leading into an instant resolution that happens mostly off screen.
 
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This must the scene that someone replied to me months ago, I never thought it would be this horrifying. I mean, what Chitang's dad did is happening in real life how people go crazy when they got cheated or hugely tricked.
 
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The book version of this chapter was gruesome. She pretty much watched him chop the kid and woman to pieces and shove them in a fridge. Then he beat the shit out of her. It was really hard to read
 
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I read the novel before, one of it strongest point is the way the word are beautifully used. Sadly, they make it short here. Change of pace is kinda fast (but angst go away in 2 chapter so not bad either).
We already know at the beginning her dad can't have kid beside MC, so not surprise baby isn't him. And he is crazy, hot temper, alcoholic, abusive, so it isn't weird he kill both in the moment of heat (real life happen all the time)
 
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It's not about "well, life is not all sunshine and rainbows"
This author just has some really bad problems with pacing, and the last few arcs they tried to go in a "darker" direction, but it just doesn't work well in the context of this manhua

You really shouldn't make a slice of life manhua, and then out of nowhere put attempted rape and murder 60 chapters in :nyoron:
Aight I understand
 
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I came back to after a while to binge the last 20 chapters... Woah that's a lot of stuff. The pace is has beem pretty bizzare but man losing control and resorting to violence was a theme present in the story since the start, i guess.
Just hope my girls will have some peace and quiet from now on so they can both sort their fellingsand lives... So sad for the stepmother and the child, they didn't deserve sunch a fate.

Thanks for the translations!
 
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I'm actually not surprised he killed her as jarring as it is while the set up of the murder was certainly abrupt given what we knew about the father and the fact that it was implied that the baby wasn't his it's not shocking he found out and caused and incident and it's genuinely scarily common for men to kill women because of cheating less common for them to also kill a baby but not that surprising there's a lack of tension that should be present though so while I don't think these events came out of nowhere the set up was lacking and the tension is virtually non existent so it just kinda feels clunky and unsatisfying this murder arc could have been stretched about three more chapters to give it room to breathe
 

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