Herbalist

[MangaDex]

 

[leechXlurk]

Seems interesting! Awaiting more chs. 😁

F**k! It's

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tragedy! 🤮

 

[Mikaa]

Heh, pierwsze polskie cuś na tej stronce na jakie natrafiłam

 

[monstergelo]

Too lewd for me

 

[anikaniko]

Fudge. I regret reading it.

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what a tragedy

 

[KirieSempai]

why? 😱

 

[Soren59]

@anikaniko

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What tragedy? I couldn't see any up to chapter 4 (aside from that lord guy possibly doing something in later chapters)

 

[kryokori]

@KirieSempai that 'too lewd' might be probably due to realism of the style, since lot of the act was not really shown if you compare it with other smut series 🤔 The 'tragedy', 'fudge' and 'regrets' might be probably due to specific audience who comes for 'manga/manhua' etc. and not 'comics'. Too bad none of commentators actually shared any constructive criticism and just summed it in one word for you.

Personaly, I thought it would be worse and was positively surprised. But I'd put it into 'comics' not 'manga' readers. The font in dialog bubbles irks me a bit. Using comic sans or something than this technical one could be better - giving less artifical effect. Adding translation notes at the end of chapter might be a nice bonus, since usually it takes a slav to get some references right (like rusałka).

 

[anikaniko]

@kryokori oh sorry about that. My comment was not really directed to how the author wrote the story but how I felt after reading the last chapter.

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I was just surprised, it was a sad ending so I didn't really expect for that to happen. And the reveal too.

I am also a comic reader and I appreciate the artwork.

@Soren59 I read it in webtoon, it's completed there. I looked for it on the internet since I got interested.

 

[kryokori]

@anikaniko if the reader skim on words and make the author misunderstand, the poor thing might end up crying in some dark corner sulking for no reason 😂 we must never save in word count for those creatures, since they recharge their working energy and spirit from the long and wordy praises

 

[ZombiesAreNotOkay]

Wow this actually pretty solid.

 

[KirieSempai]

@anikaniko this story was made up for webtoons' short story contest, so that's why the ending is like this but I'm working now a new webcomic which will contain this story but changed, so cheer up 😉

 

[KirieSempai]

thank you all for good words 😄

 

[anikaniko]

@KirieSempai Ohh that's nice. Looking forward. Good work!

 

[JeDePi]

@KirieSempai Please add a tragedy tag. Can't wait for the better ending.

 

[kasajizo]

Even Escanor cries!

 

[Itsasumabitch]

Bullshitttttt I mean cmon

 

[KirieSempai]

Hi guys! As I promised I've created a new series you can read it here https://mangadex.org/title/55670/the-hawk-s-song
The only one thing that connects those 2 titles is romance between Tolisława and Lech, so it's totally new story I hope you'll like it