Hikitotta Musume ga Asashindatta

[Felipe300LOL]

holy shit, japan can make absolutly everiting look cute

 

[sirjoey150]

What would happen if she accidentally succeeds?

 

[nyaasar]

@sirjoey150 "Fin"

 

[elinertia42]

Short. Sweet. Cute. Funny.

 

[sanctuary]

She cute

 

[Bidorchar]

KYUNTASTIC

 

[DVeils]

Loli KGB agent

 

[migh]

Cyka cute

 

[Satrio33]

@Athedite look for rimuru tempest on google😗

 

[hancea1996]

so a Russian Loli Hitman eh?

 

[New17Doctor]

Please

 

[shoutobob]

k-kiryu kazuma?!!

 

[DJKenji]

Pls somebody pick up this manga,need more of nina and 404 father daughter moments

 

[chua1332]

only the good manga get dropped

 

[nomadicengi]

Holy !@#$. A massive group upload has occurred.

 

[Nep]

Strangely wholesome for a manga about a girl trying to kill her father (adopted).

 

[KathleenNoir]

Let me know what you think of the text, I want to make sure my proofreading is good.

 

[Nep]

@KathleenNoir Personally i think its alright. Not an English major so take my words with a grain of salt.

The English (Im someone who can't differentiate the difference between grammar, vocab and sentence structure) ends up weird at times but i mostly chalk it up to the girl being a beginner in Japanese. The rest isn't quite "wrong" either.

Take page 4 chapter 4.4

"After playing a lot, you must be hungry."

"You must be hungry after playing a lot." Not much difference.

 

[KathleenNoir]

@Nep As long as the readers understand what's happening, I'm happy.

 

[livingicy]

I like this