Hilde Takes House Arpeggio

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1st chapter and I both love and hate the MC....
I love her cause well ruthless; "I already started the job, might as well finish it" and the fact that she uses crass language.

And I hate her because it seems she's thirsty for men and a bipolar daydreamer.... read the first chapter you'll somewhat understand
 
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Idk I've read 11 chapters of this and it's Just Okay. It's basic and cliche and the guy I assume is the ML is an annoying guy who criticizes and discourages the FL at every twist and turn. I imagine it's a case of "I don't want you to become a noble bc ur life isn't going to be the life of ease and luxury u think it is. It's going to Suck." But even assuming that and giving him the benefit of the doubt, he's just so critical of every single thing the ML does and it's annoying 🙄🙄🙄 0 charm point ML

FL is Okay. Typical commoner born from the daughter of a noble who eloped yada yada she actually has a ton of mana and a talent for magic (one fire spell by chapter of 11 but is presented in a way that implies a large mana pool and/or talent imo) but she's also pretty flat? Her main personality trait is picking a fight and, when she does it w the ML, she doubles back around and goes "I misunderstood you." "I don't care bc I'm the duke's dog and I'll kick u out of this house w 0 hesitation or remorse if he orders it" "well apologizing is the right thing to do regardless so I'm Sorry" and the ML's heart goes doki doki and my eyes start rolling.

The ML's entire interest in the FL is summed up with "I've never seen a girl like her before" meaning a commoner woman with Emotions and Not Like Those Other (noble) Women which was a boring cliche fifteen years ago

All in all:
flat, boring FL
ML is all tsun, no dere. Cold, callous, not even cool or hit about it, just an overall prick
0 chemistry
Not even interesting enough to be a trashy light read
 
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First 2 chapters got me interested, but the more I read, the more generic the story became. I really liked how everyone is pretty selfish in the beginning, but the characters became generic as the story went on.
 
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Friendly reminder that a territory ruled by a Duke or Duchess is called a Duchy, not Dukedom.
 
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Idk I've read 11 chapters of this and it's Just Okay. It's basic and cliche and the guy I assume is the ML is an annoying guy who criticizes and discourages the FL at every twist and turn. I imagine it's a case of "I don't want you to become a noble bc ur life isn't going to be the life of ease and luxury u think it is. It's going to Suck." But even assuming that and giving him the benefit of the doubt, he's just so critical of every single thing the ML does and it's annoying 🙄🙄🙄 0 charm point ML

FL is Okay. Typical commoner born from the daughter of a noble who eloped yada yada she actually has a ton of mana and a talent for magic (one fire spell by chapter of 11 but is presented in a way that implies a large mana pool and/or talent imo) but she's also pretty flat? Her main personality trait is picking a fight and, when she does it w the ML, she doubles back around and goes "I misunderstood you." "I don't care bc I'm the duke's dog and I'll kick u out of this house w 0 hesitation or remorse if he orders it" "well apologizing is the right thing to do regardless so I'm Sorry" and the ML's heart goes doki doki and my eyes start rolling.

The ML's entire interest in the FL is summed up with "I've never seen a girl like her before" meaning a commoner woman with Emotions and Not Like Those Other (noble) Women which was a boring cliche fifteen years ago

All in all:
flat, boring FL
ML is all tsun, no dere. Cold, callous, not even cool or hit about it, just an overall prick
0 chemistry
Not even interesting enough to be a trashy light read
thank u for your service, i'll go elswhere
 
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The first ten-or-so chapters are enteraining, then the story goes into full 'noble intrigue' with the usual cliché, and characters full of pride that are made to be hated only. Another thing is, there's no overarching story in the ten chapters (or the 20th or 46th i skipped to to see if there's actually something that happens).
I do not recommend this. The entire thing can be summerized as 'nobles are assholes.'
 

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