"Hitokiri" Shoujo Koushaku Reijou no Goei ni Naru - Vol. 1 Ch. 7

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Ahhhh ive been waiting! Thank you for the TL!

It seems like we’re getting to the juicy parts now. Hein looked sad at the end there..
actual criticism, the next arc honestly kinda. Really sucks. Shurine is adorable when shes pretending the payment for this job is money and not hugs, cuddles, kisses, backrubs, and maybe a duchess munchkin or three. and Luticia is very cute when shes trying not to change her panties.

Hein's story and the Capital Plot is "interesting", but none of it works together and for the length of material, doesnt earn any of its weight.

i felt when reading it like i spent 85% of the narrative reading the most irrelevant 1% shit. Im not really going into details but still
 
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Did the fight at least enjoyable?
honestly, in text, no. Hein uses Razorthread like Hellsing's Walter. the Hihi'irokane Souleater isnt bad that Shurine has on the coverarts. Shurine herself has a good battle but Hein gets most of the upcoming battles and at least in text, her combat is ass.
...since you seem to have read ahead of where the manga is, do you know if there's a good place to read the light novel in english?
no, i read it on Syosetu. This author has an extremely nasty habit of trying to switch protagonists in series without also developing the alt-protagonists. it worked in Mercenary Girl's School Life because the second PoV character is the GF and you can see her getting progressively more gay for protag-chan there. Hein conversely is completely static here. in the gay vampire story on the front page currently (To be a Hero even after becoming a vampire) it works primarily because we are only actually with Yuri for like, 5 chapters, and the story is very much about Rinslett being split between her idealism and the grim reality she is forced into. Their other longrunning series ive read though it goes very badly with

this blends with the whole A-Plot around Duchess Lutecia to rob any real sense of urgency or coherency in events. I could legitimately describe the plot astowhere Togoru Saso wrote it to, and it still wouldnt make sense.

btw ive reported all of these series to Mangadex and the name is still not consistent for any of them. as far as i understand it all 3 series should be under Togoru Sasa as an author.
In which the knight is going to die too because of plot armor!
no, Shurine's education is actually well covered and while she does asspull a power for the final currently written fight, its one that fits her already established skillset and fighting style
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she definitely is the type of person who would get turned on by looking at girls' underwear.
Officially shes just being nice.

Unofficially shes trying to figure out how to make Mini-Duchesses with this Chadette via magic. or hoping that Shurine is a She-stud/has a spell for emulating the nature of being a she-stud.

too bad Togoru Sasa doesnt write anything X rated.
 
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This series is getting kind of fun. It's got traditional rofan shoujo vibes mixed with a very unique starting point and design. Can't wait to see more.
 
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how should i put it

this yuri has the romance dialogue formula but has no romance chemistry or any tension, feels like unseasoned yuri with good fighting scenes, it's like you're hiring an action-media artist to draw romance lol

characters be saying "i will fight the world for you" and i feeling meh
 

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