"Hitokiri" Shoujo Koushaku Reijou no Goei ni Naru - Vol. 1 Ch. 7

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how should i put it

this yuri has the romance dialogue formula but has no romance chemistry or any tension, feels like unseasoned yuri with good fighting scenes, it's like you're hiring an action-media artist to draw romance lol

characters be saying "i will fight the world for you" and i feeling meh
Shurine and Lutecia are literally just Cierra and Alna from School Life of the Mercenary Girl aged up like 6 years, with no school life, and trading who has the parent.

oh and they both have martyr complexes.

As Written: Lutecia and Alna have a unilateral gay pining for their cute bodyguard of violence incarnate, where as Shurine/Lutecia are just hanging out with their friend.
She needs to fight him on a bridge
she does.
 
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Of course, the classic "oh, that elite warrior I sent got defeated? Surely that's nothing worrying, they must've just sucked!" defense.
I mean as Shurine pointed out the serial killer wasn't really an elite warrior, he was just a killer who preyed on the defenceless and unarmed, so the Prince isn't wrong either per se.
 
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Shurine and Lutecia are literally just Cierra and Alna from School Life of the Mercenary Girl aged up like 6 years, with no school life, and trading who has the parent.

oh and they both have martyr complexes.

As Written: Lutecia and Alna have a unilateral gay pining for their cute bodyguard of violence incarnate, where as Shurine/Lutecia are just hanging out with their friend.
I have never read that so I don't know what all that really means.. so like what? they're both suck? the other story is better?
 
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Thank you for the translation
I'm excited to see what happens next lol
 
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I have never read that so I don't know what all that really means.. so like what? they're both suck? the other story is better?
my opinion on Togoro Sasa's work is that they have good concepting, decent writing, and some nasty habits that hurt their works if they run too long. This series while the adaptation is good, im very concerned considering how bad that habit affects this story in particular.
 
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It’s funny af that people in the comments all agree that Lettuce is a closet perv :dogkek:

I wonder if Maid-san is somewhat related to the knight. Or the royal family themselves… Do we even know for how long she’s been working as a maid? She could have secret ties with the princess.

I didn’t read the following comments of the user who said next arc sucked because I feared that there might have been spoilers. I wanna get my guessing juices flowing :salute:
 
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Hein's face looks like someone who's going to betray others soon.
The knight armor seems so odd that it could be a titty knight below the armor.
Thanks for the TL!
 
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These 2 are keepers, no doubt.

I do wonder though... how long can she beat the odds? She got lucky to escape with her life last time, she best get to training 😤
 
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My dark prediction
that unparalleled knight could be the dead mother with necromancy, kinda like what they did with Game of Thrones
 
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thanks for the chapter, wait the prince has a new waifu as well?
 

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