@gregger
I feel you. Rare it is to find an author that truly commits the "Harem" theme. Most just goes fuck all at the end even though they made quite a few "best girls" for the MC, it's always the "first girl wins" kind of thing. Got nothing against Fuyuki, she's great. It's just that why do authors add other great girls (yes yes, fanservice I know) just to drop them since clearly since the MC already clearly favors the first one...
For the TL+PRs -
It's okay to use second-person pronouns with or in place of someone's name when they're the topic of conversation while being addressed, e.g. p. 14:
"Ah... I was asking around about you, Shiki-senpai." Sounds way less awkward in English when you use second-person pronouns with or instead of someone's name in that particular case.
You can make the characters sound more natural if you try! Promise!