Hope You're Happy, Lemon - Ch. 20

[the_blip]

So her defense is, "I'm not YOUR creepy insane stalker, I'm LEMON's creepy insane stalker!"

And MC is just going to roll over and do nothing, like he always does.

 

[Trostishere]

She thought she figured it out the whole thing including the bodyswap situation and his personality(from speculation) and wth did she really said that he shouldve been more gullible? thats just an insult to a normal adult human

 

[giang10012001]

welp I'm getting closer than ever to wanting to drop this series...

 

[AbuHajaar]

This character is ruining this manga imo

 

[ribbitribbitsaga]

ha.ha.ha.ha.

 

[Falsien]

We need Gordon Ramsay in the kitchen cuz nobody is cookin.

 

[Umbrum]

Ah yes, I too immediately fall in love with someone I met for 5 seconds, make up an idolized version of them and their life in my head, make my whole life revolve around them, and act like I'm a moral authority. Doesn't everyone?

Seriously this character and this whole subplot might just be the worst thing introduced so far and we're only 20 chapters in.

It’s great how this manga just keeps doing things worst than the last time

 

[TestAddress]

We need Gordon Ramsay in the kitchen cuz nobody is cookin.

your pfp cooks though. Is that smut?

 

[Falsien]

your pfp cooks though. Is that smut?

Mate take this without hostility but maybe you need help.
Its from the AMAZING mango of Wakusei Closet, and its a schoolgirl fighting for her fucking life.

 

[MomokoWaifu]

He better tell this girl Lemon cheated on him, with three different guys simultaneously. I'd love to see her view of Lemon shattered, and who knows, maybe someone would actually find out she's been lying the whole time?

I still want MC to get with Kogahara though, not Lemon. She had her chance and fucking damaged this guy, get put of his life.

 

[SaltyKnight]

This chapter was actually really hard to read because of how boring it is

 

[Dennis-aka-Denji]

I really hope the author plans on making this character more likable soon. She's insufferable, and finding all this out made it worse.

Traumatic backstory in 3 2 1

 

[nueee]

Your future detective.

 

[chairlight]

Honestly this was entertaining, with how convoluted it was.

Granted it feels kinda like it is a scene of a different manga. And it remains unclear where the author is going with this new characters introduction.

I'm not really sure what the authors goals for the series is though.

Like to use other series as an example: one piece is about adventure, nakama, freedom/creativity. It has basically everything in it, but those attributes are it's core principles throughout everything.

Star wars is a sci-fi space opera that expanded to become a family drama.

Rewriting our Love story, a webtoon about a former couple who go back into their past when they were still dating at college, but body swapped, is about learning more about each other and clearing up the mistakes and misunderstandings, and rekindling the spark. Walking a mile in each other's shoes.



I just don't have a clear idea of what story the author is trying to tell here. There is plenty of various interesting elements. But I can't really see the intent, the vision of the series.

 

[wallsg]

All I want to know is: Why did Lemon lie that she had cucked him with three separate guys when all she had to do is just break up? At this point there's is almost nothing else of interest left.

 

[comeonnow0]

I now actively want this series to end just because of how bad of a job the author is doing. The author needs to be directly told that this is bad writing.

I'm not going to do anything, obviously. I just wish it at this point.