Houkago no Isekai Boukenbu

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😃😄i want more
this is good
this should be every week
thanks for the transalation😃
 
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So basically, he axed the original, started it up again as a sorta high school AU, and no one read it and it died, so he's shit out of luck?
 
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5.5/10 not great, but not really "bad" either

as a alternative version of "Boku no Heya ga Dungeon no Kyuukeijo ni Natteshimatta Ken"
This one is..... Ok really...
But it suffers alot from being subjectively worse then the original in most ways.

There are some things i like about this, like for example one of the new characters.
But its a minority to the things that are just plain worse from the original.

The story mainly focuses on the new characters + the MC
Which indirectly means the old characters are out of the picture 95 % of the story and gets almost no screen time.
The story is not terrible because its still based on the original with a "twist" of extra characters.

But the phasing is abysmal.
The art style is fine, but i and alot of other people prefers the old one.


Slime girl is not that much different, but does not actually play any role outside of introducing the MC to the other world.
Also fails the sexy lamp test.
If you don´t know what the sexy lamp test is, then just look it upp and you will understand how pointless she and some of the later characters are to the story.

The two adventurers shows up randomly and ruins the pacing half the time they do outside of the first introduction.
They just randomly show up in the dungeon with no explanation like they were waiting for the MC to just be there.

But despite only showing up a handful of times , they actually do drive the plot forwards nicely despite having like 5 pages of screen time each to themselves.
They actually do things, even if they are minor things like helping out in a battle where other characters failed to do so.
Or to explain random tidbits about the other world.


The wolf girl is just fan service.
She does not actually fill any role what so ever and also even fails the sexy lamp test.
Now that said, im a huge furry and love these types of characters.
But that does not change the fact the story would be no different without her.

The vampire girl is nice and makes for a pretty cool romantic side-plot.
She is honestly the best part of this story.
She drives the story forward is some pretty blatant ways but if she were in the original story it might have actually been pretty nice.
She is far from perfect however and the fact she was the one who discovers the fact different drinks does different things was nice.
But the fact they discovered tea was a grow it all juice by randomly spilling that exact drink really grinds my gear for some reason.


Makes for a fun 1 off joke as a side character.
But outside of that he is just a sexy lamp like the wolf girl.
He could just as well have been a sexy lamp or someone from the other side.
He does not take a lot of screen time, but he also does pretty much nothing other then being a joke character.

If this was a longer story, it would have been a potential issue.
But for a short spin off its alright.

The class president only works as a foil to the other new characters.
She does nothing outside of her introduction and only gets a few frames of screen time until the last few chapters of the story.
She might have become a bigger part of the story if it kept on going.
but as it stands, she did not even know her roommates were of doing Isekai shit untill the last chapter of the story.
 
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